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用了賓語(yǔ)從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪(fǎng)了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫(xiě)出他們的觀(guān)點(diǎn)及自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中,我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn):考查提綱類(lèi)作文10.書(shū)面表達(dá)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),做到語(yǔ)句通順。文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。9.請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage);節(jié)約時(shí)間;避免擁擠、勞累,品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage), 看不到商品本身, 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)……提示詞匯:網(wǎng)購(gòu)shopping online。正確文章行文連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、表達(dá)流暢。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng),文章以第三人稱(chēng)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式富于變化。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá),而自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力,組織語(yǔ)言,并表達(dá)出來(lái),要求至少兩點(diǎn)。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。7. 書(shū)面表達(dá)共享單車(chē)(shared bikes)在蘇州投入使用以來(lái),給人們帶來(lái)了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn),是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示,給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于共享單車(chē)看法的稿件。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文,要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn),首先要研究表格,找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn),然后加以整合,也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫,但要點(diǎn)一定要全,不能漏掉。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請(qǐng)你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的文章(文