【正文】 參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國青年評(píng)選出了中國的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。t get lost and they don39。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。它要求將所?guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如as we all know，in different aspects of our life，more and more morden，a lot，all of you，first of all，in our hometown，one of the most meaningful things，what39。山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)年5月18－19日，習(xí)近平總書記在全國生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)大會(huì)中，指出要加快構(gòu)建生態(tài)文明體系，要全面推動(dòng)綠色發(fā)展。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。提示詞語：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。15．（根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)分享一個(gè)你和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，表達(dá)清楚、明了。注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。How Can We Protect Ourselves?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is ing, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以How can we protect ourselves為題，談一談青少年在日常生活中應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)自己。2. be careful to make friends。13．（（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。下午我們?nèi)ヅ郎健Ｔ诠财嚿衔覀冋勑︼L(fēng)生，我們很高興。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)，注意表達(dá)的順序。12．（在過去In the past，學(xué)到了很多知識(shí)learn a lot of knowledge, 對(duì)某人感激be grateful to sb, 對(duì)我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學(xué)相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學(xué)遲到be late for school不太愛好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)I am not good at sports，在未來In the future…，簡要寫出自己對(duì)未來的規(guī)劃。3. ……（補(bǔ)充12點(diǎn)所失）今后的學(xué)習(xí)打算……（12句話描述自己未來的打算）要求：① 詞數(shù)100左右；② 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；③ 文中需包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過渡詞句，使短文通順、連貫；④ 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。，互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助。11．（在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出?！敬鸢浮縎milesA smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。某英文報(bào)以“Smiles”為題,舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed