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:假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在的城市的新華學(xué)校學(xué)中文,來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請寫信介紹房子的情況,并告知其住房面積為25平方米。? 開頭1:Dear Bob,?I’m very glad that you will e in September, when I will meet you at the airport and we can do lots of things together.? 開頭2:Dear Bob,?I’m so glad to learn that you’re ing in ’ve found a place for ’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen.? 點評:開頭1顯然離題。而開頭2在開頭稍示歡迎,以示禮數(shù),接著便惜墨如金,轉(zhuǎn)入正題,清楚地交待公寓的情況。? 【實例分析3】說明文:假設(shè)你是李華,最近國內(nèi)一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應(yīng)該遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信,反映討論結(jié)果。? 開頭1:Dear Editor,?Recently, our class has had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.? 開頭2:Dear Editor, ?I am Li am from Beijing High I have known from your newspaper that you are arguing about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.? 點評:開頭2交待的是作者自己的情況和從何處獲知的信息,離題甚遠。而開頭1所交待的是討論的主題。與主題無關(guān)的信息應(yīng)堅決摒棄,確保所寫內(nèi)容緊扣主題。? 【實例分析4】應(yīng)用文:假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國老師Miss Morgan 要求你們明天下午去聽一個有關(guān)美國歷史的講座。因你已答應(yīng)明天下午3:30去機場接從法國回來的叔叔,所以你不能參加。請你寫封信向Miss Morgan 請假。? 開頭1:Dear Miss Morgan,I am your student Li wanted us to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow I can’t go because I have to go to the airport to meet my uncle.? 開頭2: Dear Miss Morgan,I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow uncle is returning home from France, and I promised to meet him at the airport 3:30 tomorrow :開頭1的自我介紹顯得多余,而且請假理由并沒有交待清楚。開頭2先表明寫作目的,即關(guān)于聽講座請假事宜,后申述請假理由,讓讀者一目了然。技巧總結(jié)1——高考作文開頭“六式”? 1.開門見山,揭示主題? 文章一開頭,就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣度假)的開頭是:I Spent my last vacation happily.又如:“Honesty”(談?wù)\實)一文中的開頭:Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a “l(fā)iar”,and is looked upon by honest people.? 2.交代人物、事情、時間或環(huán)境:在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan”(去金山旅游)的開頭:The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to bus ride there took three long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.? 用回憶的方法來開頭。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的開頭是:I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.? 4.概括性的開頭即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書的快樂)的開頭:People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.? 5.介紹環(huán)境式的開頭: 即開頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如“An Accident”(一場事故)的開頭是:It was a rainy and windy sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly was on my way back to , a speeding car came round the corner.? 6.交待寫作目的的開頭。在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什么問題等。如 “Pollution Control”(控制污染)的開頭:In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution ——首段寫作“九法”? :由于諺語一般已經(jīng)被大家所接受,用諺語提出自己的觀點也容易被讀者所接受。As the saying goes, “Money makes the mare go”,(有錢能使鬼推磨)but there are many things we can39。t ?? ? ? buy with money, such as time and true love.… 定義法是通過對文章中的關(guān)鍵詞做一些簡單或正面或反面的解釋,限定其范圍,這樣比較有利于引出主題?!癙ractice makes perfect” is an old tells us that it does not matter if we are clumsy at doing long as we keep on trying and practicing, we will do a good job in the 通過提出一個或一連串的問題,可以激發(fā)讀者的興趣,從而引出主題。 you have many friends? Are they similar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer? is a good student? Different people may have different answers to this question.? 概括法指先總結(jié)文章內(nèi)容所涉及的現(xiàn)狀,然后引出主題。In recent years, with the development of science and technology, the Internet has e into more and more homes and is playing a more and more important role in our work and daily has bee a must to us, but at the same time, the Internet has also brought with it a lot of problems.? 故事法指用簡單有趣的故事激發(fā)讀者的興趣,從而提出自己的觀點。如:“Is Stress a Bad Thing?”O(jiān)ne day, I was walking in the street,…” ? “Just as eating without liking harms the health, learning without interest harms the memory and can39。t be retained.” From Vinci39。s words we can see how important it is to motivate the students in language learning.? : 為了得到讀者的認(rèn)可,文章的開始可以引出調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)等,借以提出主題,如下面“Can school children start using the Internet?”的第一句話。percent of the students interviewd in the survey firmly believe that … ? 假設(shè)法是指通過假設(shè)提出一種選擇,交代文章要涉及的問題,從而提出文章的主題。Suppose you were offered two jobs, one is highlypaid but rather demanding, the other is less demanding, but poorlypaid, which would you prefer?… ? 具體寫作時,同學(xué)們不一定必要拘泥于一種方式,可以將上述方法綜合起來。