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別是不注意生詞或短語(yǔ)提示,或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫,層次不清晰,邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料,找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索,在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容,增加可讀性。為此,應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。39。s more, I39。39。m afraid, I think等表示過(guò)度及連接的詞匯,使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對(duì)對(duì)每一個(gè)句子都盡可能避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在:(1)多用。1)There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.(劃線部分改為Five hundred)2)A hero es from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.(劃線部分改為ing或去掉es)(2)缺失。1)He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.(遺漏處加be)2)It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.(遺漏處加are)(3)時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。1)Hurry up!Here is ing the bus.(劃線部分改為es)2)Class start at 8:00 am.(劃線部分改為starts)書(shū)面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時(shí)態(tài),但特定時(shí)間背景下時(shí)態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹,應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主;過(guò)去的介紹,應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主;日記應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主;通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。千萬(wàn)不要隨心所欲,不假思索地使用,造成大面積失分。(4)語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由于漢語(yǔ)被動(dòng)色彩不濃,因此英語(yǔ)表達(dá)易受影響,該用而不用,不該用而用be動(dòng)詞。如:1)He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.(遺漏處加been)2)The matter was happened two years ago.(劃線處去掉was)還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。如:3)I am think that I’ll learn how to use a puter.(劃線處去掉am)4)They are decide that they will study harder.(劃線處去掉are)1)He wrote an 800words article yesterday.(劃線處改為800word)2)It is a tenminutes walk from here to there.(劃線處改為tenminute或ten minutes39。39。)冠詞屬小詞,重視不夠,影響表達(dá)。1)How do you spell the puter?(劃線處去掉the)2)We should treasure the time because the time is money.(劃線處去掉the)用準(zhǔn)用準(zhǔn)確地道的語(yǔ)言,不能生澀難懂,不合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見(jiàn)現(xiàn)象如下:寫(xiě)句子,用語(yǔ)不準(zhǔn),而根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)單詞堆砌而成。如:1)Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.(錯(cuò))→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.(正)2)Wele you e back to our school to visit.(錯(cuò))→You’re wele back to visit our school.(正)另外,不重視掌握單詞,寫(xiě)作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋,用模糊定義,語(yǔ)言生澀難懂,文意混亂,表達(dá)不清。如: is good at teaching English。he has many good ways to use to teach us.(錯(cuò))→ is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.(正)英語(yǔ)作文,受漢語(yǔ)影響,雖語(yǔ)法正確,卻不符英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如:1)Our friends are all over the world.(錯(cuò))→We have friends all over the world.(正)2)My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.(錯(cuò))→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.(正)語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。簡(jiǎn)明扼要,表達(dá)清楚,是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺,非一日之寒。用全初學(xué)寫(xiě)作要簡(jiǎn)單完整清楚地表達(dá),就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系:一味追求新、奇、特、難,容易出錯(cuò)。如:1)Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that es from the northwest of the Sichuan province.(錯(cuò))→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.(正)2)It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(錯(cuò))→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(正)在不可省的地方省略,結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整,句意就不明確。如:1)He studies very hard and kind.(錯(cuò))→He studies very hard and he is very kind.(正)2)He doesn39。39。t know what and how to do.(錯(cuò))→He doesn39。39。t know what to do and how to do it.(正)另外,考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的,要點(diǎn)齊全,是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來(lái)源:標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題,卻粗心漏掉不寫(xiě),造成失分。書(shū)寫(xiě)標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡(jiǎn)潔明了,有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對(duì)性,并注意單詞字母大小寫(xiě)。格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式,如通知的開(kāi)頭,常常要交待通知的對(duì)象;日記開(kāi)頭,常常交待時(shí)間和天氣;信件的左上角必須注明寫(xiě)信人的地址和時(shí)間,下一行要頂格寫(xiě)上稱呼,正文結(jié)束后,要有結(jié)束語(yǔ),并簽名。正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處,應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義,理清大意,將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí),并檢查有無(wú)遺漏。常識(shí)性。原材料不一定反應(yīng),但仍然重要,既屬內(nèi)容,又承上啟下,增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫(xiě)通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”,“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”;寫(xiě)參觀歡迎詞開(kāi)頭可用“You’re wele to visit our city.”,“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”,結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”,介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”;寫(xiě)信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”,“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”必須注意原則:不多不少。該有的不少,不該有的不寫(xiě)。整潔文章寫(xiě)好后,應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改,不忙于提前交卷,避免大小寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤,謄寫(xiě)應(yīng)盡可能書(shū)寫(xiě)工整,布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會(huì)增加得高分機(jī)會(huì)??傊私?、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面,就容易得高分。