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別是不注意生詞或短語提示,或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫,層次不清晰,邏輯性不強。因此應認真思考材料,找到所要表達的主旨文意及線索,在線索引導下通暢地表達內(nèi)容,增加可讀性。為此,應注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。39。s more, I39。39。m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯,使之有較強的感情色彩。用對對每一個句子都盡可能避免語法錯誤。通常錯處出在:(1)多用。1)There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.(劃線部分改為Five hundred)2)A hero es from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.(劃線部分改為ing或去掉es)(2)缺失。1)He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.(遺漏處加be)2)It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.(遺漏處加are)(3)時態(tài)錯誤。1)Hurry up!Here is ing the bus.(劃線部分改為es)2)Class start at 8:00 am.(劃線部分改為starts)書面表達可能出現(xiàn)多種時態(tài),但特定時間背景下時態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹,應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主;過去的介紹,應以一般過去時為主;日記應以一般過去時為主;通知應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。千萬不要隨心所欲,不假思索地使用,造成大面積失分。(4)語態(tài)錯誤。由于漢語被動色彩不濃,因此英語表達易受影響,該用而不用,不該用而用be動詞。如:1)He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.(遺漏處加been)2)The matter was happened two years ago.(劃線處去掉was)還有喜歡在動詞前面加be動詞。如:3)I am think that I’ll learn how to use a puter.(劃線處去掉am)4)They are decide that they will study harder.(劃線處去掉are)1)He wrote an 800words article yesterday.(劃線處改為800word)2)It is a tenminutes walk from here to there.(劃線處改為tenminute或ten minutes39。39。)冠詞屬小詞,重視不夠,影響表達。1)How do you spell the puter?(劃線處去掉the)2)We should treasure the time because the time is money.(劃線處去掉the)用準用準確地道的語言,不能生澀難懂,不合英語表達習慣。常見現(xiàn)象如下:寫句子,用語不準,而根據(jù)漢語句序進行相應的英語單詞堆砌而成。如:1)Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.(錯)→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.(正)2)Wele you e back to our school to visit.(錯)→You’re wele back to visit our school.(正)另外,不重視掌握單詞,寫作時碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋,用模糊定義,語言生澀難懂,文意混亂,表達不清。如: is good at teaching English。he has many good ways to use to teach us.(錯)→ is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.(正)英語作文,受漢語影響,雖語法正確,卻不符英語表達習慣。如:1)Our friends are all over the world.(錯)→We have friends all over the world.(正)2)My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.(錯)→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.(正)語言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時。簡明扼要,表達清楚,是關鍵所在。冰凍三尺,非一日之寒。用全初學寫作要簡單完整清楚地表達,就要把握兩個關系:一味追求新、奇、特、難,容易出錯。如:1)Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that es from the northwest of the Sichuan province.(錯)→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.(正)2)It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(錯)→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(正)在不可省的地方省略,結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整,句意就不明確。如:1)He studies very hard and kind.(錯)→He studies very hard and he is very kind.(正)2)He doesn39。39。t know what and how to do.(錯)→He doesn39。39。t know what to do and how to do it.(正)另外,考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達給分的,要點齊全,是直接因素。必須注意要點來源:標題。有些需要標題,卻粗心漏掉不寫,造成失分。書寫標題應力求簡潔明了,有較強概括力和針對性,并注意單詞字母大小寫。格式。不少應用文需要正確的格式,如通知的開頭,常常要交待通知的對象;日記開頭,常常交待時間和天氣;信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時間,下一行要頂格寫上稱呼,正文結(jié)束后,要有結(jié)束語,并簽名。正文。這是全文要點集中之處,應認真思考材料含義,理清大意,將所有要點逐一落實,并檢查有無遺漏。常識性。原材料不一定反應,但仍然重要,既屬內(nèi)容,又承上啟下,增強文章可讀性。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”,“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”;寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re wele to visit our city.”,“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”,結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”,介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”;寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”,“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”必須注意原則:不多不少。該有的不少,不該有的不寫。整潔文章寫好后,應認真修改,不忙于提前交卷,避免大小寫及標點符號錯誤,謄寫應盡可能書寫工整,布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會增加得高分機會??傊私?、掌握、運用好以上五個方面,就容易得高分。