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at I submitted on June 30th, 2010 was returned, because my data contains some mercial activity, which is inconsistent with Tourist am writing to you to explain why I want to change tourist visa into business XX pany which mentioned in the data was established up in 2006 by my the beginning of 2008, our pany cooperated with pany XXXX as an agent of grape wine of pany I have been working for the XX pany since are two purposes of this trip to the one hand, I will learn more about the grape wine manor of XXX pany which has a close cooperation with us for many the other hand, I want to have a tour to Australia with my friend who is from submitting the application form on June 30th, in order to get cheaper air tickets in advance, my friend booked them on July were meant to fly to Australia on August 2nd, but considering it’s my first time to go to Australia and the distance is very far, we decided that I would fly to XX on August 2nd to meet him first, then we go to Perth, Australia together on the 10th of the travel in Australia for 18 days, we would fly back to XX on August 28th, then I return to china from XX on September the guarantee of my friend, the visa to XX has been applied successfully on the the worry is whether my route to XX on August 2nd will be delayed because of my second application of Australian visa after the to my certificate of salary, because it’s my family business, my mother always gives me the salary in I don’t have the bank’s reference about can simply provide some bills of my deposits on the bank and credit the total expense of this travel will be afforded by XX it’s my first time to apply the visa to Australia, I have few experience on sincerely hope this transition to business visa will be you very : Attachment: Invitation letter of XXX pany The picture with principle of XXXX panyBusiness transaction vouchers between XX pany and XXX pany My incumbency certification and ine verification in XX pany Visa to XXYours sincerely XX(寫信人姓名)