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herroommates.(住在校外,還是和同學(xué)共住)students should be asked to grade their teacher(是否學(xué)生應(yīng)該要求給老師打分)students should take a parttime job in school(是否學(xué)生在校期間應(yīng)該找兼職)2)第一句的第二種寫法:某事引發(fā)人們關(guān)注(不用寫事情的經(jīng)過(guò),用一個(gè)詞兒代替事情過(guò)程)Recently,the problem of “”has aroused wide concern amongthe publicCurrently,he phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wideconcern among the public(酒后駕駛)Currently,the frequent jobhopping of graduates has arousedwide concern among the public.(跳槽)Currently,the problem of “food safety” has aroused wideconcern among the public.(食品安全)3)第一句的第三種寫法:社會(huì)現(xiàn)象變成某個(gè)“詞”(這種寫法最大的魅力也是,將事件過(guò)程壓縮成一個(gè)詞?。㏕he newlycoined word/phrase“”may by no means soundstrange to most people in this day and age.(“”中填進(jìn)的詞有:nude picture scandal艷照門丑聞; watershortage缺水;online education網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育;fake diplomas假證書;craze fortalent shows 選秀狂熱)4)第一句的第四種寫法:社會(huì)趨勢(shì)(一般都寫在“有越來(lái)越多的人干什么去了”這樣的社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀)There is a growing tendency nowadays that…graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job(就業(yè)難)people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm forvolunteer works/ various talent shows(選秀熱)students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm forstudents leaders selection(競(jìng)選班干部熱)people in mounting numbers participate in the test for nationalcivil servants.(公務(wù)員熱)undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduateentrance examination(考研熱)people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets(買彩票熱)people in mounting numbers use credit card.(信用卡熱)注:people in mounting numbers 都表示“越來(lái)越多的人”,切忌寫:more and more people,找死!5)第一句的第五種寫法:某個(gè)現(xiàn)象人盡皆知(一般寫比較大的,比較嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問(wèn)題)No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that…that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxesor bags(過(guò)度包裝問(wèn)題)that there has been a steady rise in the number of rurallaborers who swarm into big cities.(農(nóng)工進(jìn)城)The economy has been developing at a considerably highspeed at the expense of living environment.(經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展以犧牲環(huán)境為代價(jià))文章第二句話:(溫馨提示:陳述正反觀點(diǎn);你只要說(shuō),針對(duì)某個(gè)事情,人們看法存在不一樣就行,不要再第一段就開(kāi)始具體論述雙方的觀點(diǎn)各是什么?。〥oes anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ?Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to :對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)論述段(溫馨提示:文章的第3,4,5,6四句話,都寫在第二段;這是字?jǐn)?shù)最多,內(nèi)容最豐滿的一段,稱為“豬肚”)文章第三句話:(提出正方觀點(diǎn),比如說(shuō)他支持什么;總體來(lái)說(shuō),有兩種表示支持的說(shuō)法)Some maintain that(表示“認(rèn)為”的單詞,打死都不寫“think”;maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以寫)1)某物是有好處的:something is beneficial to sth.(練習(xí):跳槽對(duì)學(xué)生有利)2)某物優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn):The merits of outweigh itsdemerits.(練習(xí):用手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn))文章第四句話:(上句提出了論點(diǎn),這句就必須要用論據(jù)來(lái)證明,論據(jù)可以寫一個(gè),也可若干個(gè);個(gè)數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))Firstly,…secondly,…last but not least,….(萬(wàn)能理由:這個(gè)只能在新東方小虹的六級(jí)寫作課堂聽(tīng)啦?。┪恼碌谖寰湓挘?既是正反對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)作文,第三句提出正方觀點(diǎn),那么這句當(dāng)然要提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)啦!)However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that(反方觀點(diǎn)),1)某物是有壞處:something is detrimental to )某物缺點(diǎn)優(yōu)點(diǎn): The demerits of outweighitsmerits.(merits 代替advantages)文章第六句話:(上句提出了論點(diǎn),這句就必須要用論據(jù)來(lái)證明,論據(jù)可以寫一個(gè),也可若干個(gè);個(gè)數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))For one thing,… for another,…第三段:個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)段(文章的第7,8,9句;四六級(jí)作文,包括考研作文,都要求寫essay議論文,短評(píng),所以,寫了上述對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)的目的,其實(shí)就是為了最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)?。┪恼碌谄呔湓挘篢o my way of thinking,… From my perspective,+ 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)句(參見(jiàn)第三、五)文章第八句話:(上句提出了論點(diǎn),這句就必須要用論據(jù)來(lái)證明,論據(jù)可以寫一個(gè),也可若干個(gè);個(gè)數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))In the firstplace,… in the second place,…(萬(wàn)能理由)文章第九句話:(再次重申自己的觀點(diǎn),和第七句話正好構(gòu)成“總分總結(jié)構(gòu)”)Given all the factors I have outlined,I strongly mit to thenotion that(觀點(diǎn)句)或者是:Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I aminclined to agree with the idea that…