【正文】 joyful occasion, ignoring the fact that most of them were emotionally ended up reminding ourselves instead.()Meaning: In place of reminding Jimmy, we finished up reminding ourselves(that there would always be people who cared about us).9....we were reminded that the constant love and support of our friends and family would get us through whatever life might present.()Meaning:...we were reminded that continual love and support of our friends and family would help us overe all the hardships in simplicity with which Jimmy had reconciled everything for us should not have been surprising.()Meaning: The simple way with which Jimmy had helped us to accept reality should not have been Six: Writing New Horizon College English Book Ⅲ陳超ProblemResponseEvaluation Example 1 from the TextProblem:( and 5)Jimmy was a wreck when my father died of a heart attack in was simply in now quit speaking all matter how hard I tried, Jimmy could not accept the hard my mother died of lung cancer six months later and I alone was left to look after :()I had my brother, Jimmy, e and live with me in New York City for a went wherever I went and seemed to adjust pretty helped him return to our parents’ house and his old job as he has lived there for 11 years now with many different caretakers and blossomed on his has bee essential to the you have any mail to be picked up or your dog needs walking, he is your :()It was possible to have a home with room for both his limitations and my fact, caring for Jimmy has enriched my life more than anything else ever could 2The population explosion of urban areas Problem: slumsregular failures of electric and water servicesextensive unemployment, : improving the facilities in rural areasattracting more people to live in rural areas Evaluation: The problem might be solved if rural areas were to have all the facilities of urban CompositionThe population explosion of urban areas(Problem)The population explosion of urban areas has given rise to a lot of problems such as sprawling slums and regular failures of electric and water services because of the excessive addition, the urban areas suffer extensive unemployment and strained educational and recreational population explosion of urban areas must be corrected.(Response)One of the ways to correct the population explosion of urban areas is to improve the facilities in rural parking facilities, attractive and wellstocked department and food stores, drug stores, gift shops and bakeries should be built in rural areas to convince more people living there to stay where they government should offer lower tax rates and modest homes on convenient terms to those who choose to live in the rural areas.(Evaluation)If rural areas were built to have all the facilities that urban areas do, the population explosion in urban areas can be Practice Directions: Write a position of no less than 120 words with a problemresponseevaluation structure on the following can follow the detailed outline given as : The fight against air pollution Problem: The region has been seriously polluted by harmful : close down/modernize some factoriesmove some factories out of the regionplant trees Evaluation: People are happy with the measures taken by the Horizon College English Book Ⅲ陳超 Sample CompositionThe fight against air pollution(Problem)The region has been seriously polluted by harmful smog, which proves to be the cause of many illnesses and for the climbing death a result, people have started to move out of the area.(Response)In response to the problem, the local government has decided to fight against air has closed down several factories, which were considered to be the major cause of the power plants have been modernized to give off less pollution and also moved further away from people’s homes so as to decrease the the same time, the local government has decided to plant trees in and around the region because trees can absorb some of the pollution.(Evaluation)People wele all the measures taken by the , more and more people have begun to move back to the region to take part in this battle for a clean AssignmentDirections: Write a position of no less than 120 words with a problemresponseevaluation structure on the following :Love Without Bounds Problem: The outbreak of a devastating earthquake in Wenchuan, Sichuan Response: the timely response of the Chinese Communists to itthe dash of PLA men to the rescue of the victims therethe reactions of every Chinese citizen to the disaster Evaluation: There are no bounds to what the love of the Chinese nation could CompositionLove Without BoundsAt 2:28 ., May 12th, 2008, a severe earthquake with a magnitude of on the Richter scale struck Wenchuan, an area of Sichuan, leaving the place with ruins an immediate result of that, around 69,000 people died, with another 18,000 missing, over 370,000 injured, and 5,000,000 survivors the arrival of disaster was a sheer paralysis of electricity, water works, telemunications and accessible to tourism for its scenic beauty, the area was now pletely secluded from the outside world.(Problem)Faced with such a devastating disaster, the Chinese Communists held China together with their role models, and called upon the whole dropped relief supplies for the , medical workers from different parts of the country and the world flocked to the epicenter in good time to offer first aid to the injured and the to go there in person, most of us were in charge of rear services, for which some made tents, medicine, food, and night, and every one of us vied with one another to donate money and fact, effecting the rescue of the victims who remain as firm and appreciate our efforts as much as those in Sichuan do has refined our love more than anything else ever could have.(Response)With the disaster relief drive being in full swing and with the live reports on it dominating the headlines of all mass media, we wer