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in Zhanjiang. This morning, John goes to Huguang Lake with me./ John takes me to visit Huguang Lake. There are many people in the park. They are doing different things. Some boys are swimming in the lake. Some girls are singing and dancing by the lake. Some old people are talking with their friends under the tree. What’s more, some young people are taking photos. John and I are having a great time riding the bike. I am having fun today./ I am having a good time today./ How happy I am today!/ What a good time I am having today! _____________________________________ _____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ 思 路 點(diǎn) 撥 第四步: 1)小組內(nèi)互評(píng)作文。 2)請(qǐng)找出你或你小組同學(xué)寫(xiě)得好兩個(gè)句子。 3)請(qǐng)抄出你的錯(cuò)句并且用紅筆改正。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思 路 點(diǎn) 撥 (省略)