【正文】 nd I definitely agree with you on of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of , “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each will offer a wonderful from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy , I can’t list really can’t wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully，Li Hua【名師點評】這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can39。t wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服?！颈本┚砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】本文是設(shè)計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。【北京卷高考英語】【試題回放】開放作文請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達?？忌攸c要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確?！救珖砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹。祝賀蘇琳生日。感謝工作人員。索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：詞數(shù)100左右?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。開頭語已為你寫好。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂的 birth to ，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活?！靖呖加⒄Z全國卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：：距白山入口處500米。：單人間(共20間)，100元/天。雙人間(共15間)，150元/天。熱水淋浴。：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。：全天免費開放。注意：，開頭語已為你寫好。，以使行文連貫。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利?！局貞c卷高考英語】【試題回放】據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：。Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ，Li Hua[名師點評]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!好處：擲地有聲，語言準(zhǔn)確。,句式準(zhǔn)確【江蘇卷高考英語】【試題回放】 2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項活動。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞Ｗ⒁猓喊l(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student spo