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【正文】 s they usually mentioned above, after I became a university student, there was nothing more agreeable to me than the freedom I enjoyed in this period, being poor and busy, I lived a hard was so hard up that I couldn’t even afford the streetcar though I worked nonstop day and night, I still felt hard pressed for time to finish correcting papers and preparing was because while I was a firstyear student at the university, I concurrently taught Chinese at two middle imagine a country girl fresh from middle school having the audacity to teach those husky young northerners!They certainly had every reason to call me “Child Teacher”.點(diǎn)評(píng)謝冰瑩于1929年5月從上海到達(dá)北平，不久考入北京女子師范大學(xué)，《我愛作文》是她在這時(shí)期寫的一篇散文。作者對(duì)當(dāng)時(shí)學(xué)校作文教學(xué)的一些看法，至今仍有參考價(jià)值。①“女師大”指當(dāng)時(shí)的“北京女子師范大學(xué)”，故譯Peking Women’s Normal University。②“現(xiàn)在你們是大學(xué)生了”意即“由于你們是大學(xué)生了”，故譯Now that you’re university students，其中Now that（或Now）作“因?yàn)椤苯猓扔贐ecause。此句也可以這樣處理：Now, as university students…。③“每學(xué)期至少要交七八篇文章”譯為You must each hand in for each semester at least seven or eight positions,其中for each semester也可簡(jiǎn)化為each semester。④“老師”不宜譯為teacher，因teacher還沒有變成Dr.、Judge、Professor等有尊敬含義的習(xí)用稱呼，故譯為Sir（姑且把“老師”定為男性）。⑤“這是我這個(gè)鄉(xiāng)下姑娘發(fā)出的愚問”譯為That was a silly question raised by my humble self，a country girl，其中用my humble self（敝人）代替myself，略帶俏皮，符合原文的內(nèi)涵。⑥“望斷天涯兒不歸”譯為Mother’s Longing for the Return of Her Wandering Child，是參照作者當(dāng)時(shí)為逃避母親為她包辦的婚姻而流落他鄉(xiāng)的背景而譯的。⑦“溫故知新”譯為L(zhǎng)earn the New by Reviewing the Old，等于Learn New Things by Reviewing What Has Been Learned Before。⑧“國(guó)家興亡，匹夫有責(zé)”譯為The Destiny of the Nation Is the Concern of Every Citizen，其中The Destiny也可改用The Rise and Fall。⑨“如果硬要由腦筋里壓榨出一些什么空空洞洞的理論來”意即“如果強(qiáng)迫學(xué)生在作文時(shí)從事空洞的議論”，故譯Forcing students to do hollow theorizing in position，其中hollow和empty同義；theorizing的意思是“議論”。⑩“而且對(duì)于這些學(xué)生，簡(jiǎn)直是一種無形的精神虐待”譯為but also subject them，so to speak，to an ordeal of invisible mental abuse，其中插入語(yǔ)so to speak或so to say是成語(yǔ)，作“可以這么說”、“恕我直言”等解，用以表達(dá)原文的“簡(jiǎn)直”。又an ordeal(折磨)是譯文中的增益成分，原文雖無其詞而有其意。⑾“我絕不傷害他們的腦筋”意即“我絕不強(qiáng)迫他們做傷腦筋的事”，故譯took care not to impose on my students anything that would cause mental torture。⑿“說起來真太冒險(xiǎn)了，自己還是個(gè)剛跨出中學(xué)不久的鄉(xiāng)下姑娘，去教那些又高又大的北方青年”意即“自己是剛從中學(xué)畢業(yè)的鄉(xiāng)下姑娘，竟敢去教那些又高又大的北方青年”，故譯Just imagine a country girl fresh from middle school having the audacity to teach those husky young northerners，其中Just imagine(想一想)是譯文中的增益成分；fresh from…的意思是“剛從??畢業(yè)的”；having the audacity to…的意思是“膽敢從事??”⒀“怪不得他們要叫我‘孩子先生’了”，意即“他們完全可以喊‘孩子先生’”,故譯They certainly had every reason(或good reason)to call me “Child Teacher”。
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