【正文】 in have since worked hard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of a result , I amd now well on myway to graduation with double degrees in both puter science and finance in my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro pany as I dabbled into the real business settled for newspaper as our maiden attempt..As a new horn,I took a handson approach, from editing to circulating, from cost control to market strong leadership and sunergy of the entire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its inexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in the I saw the silver lining in the failed now know more about where I need to work I was a little boy, my parents taught me how to manage money in the safest helped me put my pocket money in the bank and get interest as a , as a grownup already,I recognize that systematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much more about what finance is all , as one’s knowledge about swimming increases, the desire to swim in the sea , with more academic exposure, I have e to realize how I am illequipped with the knowledge needed to stay afloat in the trubulent sea of selfconscious humbleness versus the profundiy of finance as a muchrespected discipline has led me to opt for further study in the US,home to a number of worldclass colleges of meticulous parision and crosschecking, I have settled forClark University,the birthplace of the firstever graduate school in the trust that demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind of finance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update my vision as financier of the me,Clark is the best and right place that can surely make the difference, academically and professionally am more than anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble part to its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative am therefore very much looking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream that offer e just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in one of the greatest colleges in the US.第五篇：出國留學：怎樣寫好個人陳述出國留學：怎樣寫好個人陳述服諾網告訴您：個人陳述，就是Personal Statement（簡稱PS）是在申請英美澳加等國家的大學、研究生錄取的時候，由申請人寫的一篇關于自我陳述的文章。PS的寫作是出國留學申請中技術含量相對比較高的一個步驟，要想淋漓盡致地描述好自己是一件相當難的事情。那么怎樣寫好個人陳述呢？下面就為大家一一介紹。一、PS在申請環(huán)節(jié)中的重要性PS是申請出國留學時需要準備的材料中必不可少的，也是最重要的文書材料之一。當所申請的學校競爭激烈時，一篇出色的PS會讓教授以及學校對你刮目相看，可能使背景不突出的你脫穎而出被理想的學校錄取，可以說PS是唯一能凸顯你與眾不同的文書材料。二、怎樣寫好個人陳述（PS）長度上需短小精悍PS應該是一種既短小又精悍的文體。一般來說一篇PS的正常長度應該在六百到八百個英文單詞之間，不宜過多，也不宜過少。而仍然有相當多的申請者選擇寫一篇超長的PS，甚至有些學生所寫的PS字數達到三千多字。他們想要將自己的各個方面的優(yōu)點和成績呈現出來。但是PS不是個人簡歷的詳細補充，有許多的信息都可以通過其它得文件來展示。在留學申請的旺季，面對堆堆積如山的申請文書，一般審查一個PS的時間只有短短的3分鐘，而那種冗長的PS只會讓審核者心生厭煩。內容上需包括6個why即你為什么有興趣在這個行業(yè)？哪些事情促使你對這個專業(yè)的興趣不斷增加加深? 為什么覺得此專業(yè)在未來很重要？為什么會選擇這所學校？有哪些具體的研究經歷和研究項目吸引你？你認為自己對該研究領域有沒有價值？主線上需緊扣主題PS寫作時須緊扣所要申請的專業(yè)的主題，主線要清楚明確，不能盲目的追求個性化。許多申請者都認為PS需要“獨特”和“煽情”，因此想盡辦法地挖掘自己的“獨特”點和亂“煽情”，結果往往事半功倍，如果一篇PS中使用了大段篇幅寫一些摸不著主題的個性，那么在招生者眼中，這根本是在做無用功。必須明確，PS這樣一篇短短數百字的文章是沒有地方去說不相干的廢話的。三、留學生的心得體驗看你是什么專業(yè)，如果理工科的學生需要突出對于科研經歷和收獲的描述，如果是文科和商科就要突出自己的特色跟能力，如果你有精彩的故事可以講，對方錄取的人也會喜歡，畢竟他們天天申材料，已經煩的不能再煩了。一定要突出自己的優(yōu)勢，如果是博士，專業(yè)性會很強，讓導師覺得你能幫上忙。個人陳述可以包括：你為什么有興趣在這個行業(yè)，你想學任何東西，從這個學校，你的個人性格優(yōu)勢，獲得獎勵，曾參加在工作中你計劃的未來。將上面的這些內容領悟，那么一定能夠輕而易舉的寫出一篇優(yōu)秀出色的個人陳述。如有任何問題，可咨詢400 800 8180。亦可直接咨詢，美國留學|