【正文】 章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理?？键c(diǎn)：（滿(mǎn)分15分）(共1題，計(jì)15分) 你看過(guò)公益廣告Family嗎？如果你看過(guò)，再回顧父母一直以來(lái)對(duì)自己的關(guān)心和呵護(hù)，相信你的心里一定會(huì)有一種感動(dòng)。假如你是Li Lei, 請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給你的爸爸媽媽寫(xiě)一封信，把你的感動(dòng)和對(duì)他們的感激之情說(shuō)出來(lái)吧。 要求： 1．文章必須包含下表所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名； 3．詞數(shù)：90 詞左右（開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 父母的愛(ài)： 父母既要忙于工作，又要照顧我，很累； 為我提供衣食，文具書(shū)籍； 早上很早起床為我做早餐，晚上等我睡覺(jué)之后才休息； 當(dāng)我有煩惱時(shí)，耐心傾聽(tīng)并提供建議； ……(自己補(bǔ)充，至少兩點(diǎn)。) 我的感激和決心： 感謝父母對(duì)我的付出的辛勞（hard work）； 決心努力學(xué)習(xí)，在將來(lái)的考試中取得進(jìn)步； ……（自己補(bǔ)充，至少一點(diǎn)） Dear Mum and Dad, You are the best parents in the world．I’m writing the letter to show my love and thanks to you． _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I wish you young and happy all the time．I will love you forever． With love Li Lei 2013/2014學(xué)年度第二學(xué)期期Dear Mum and Dad, You are the best parents in the world. I’m writing the letter to show my love and thanks to you. You not only are busy with your work but also take good care of me. So you are always too tired. You always provide me with clothes and food. You also buy lots of staionery and books for me. In the morning, you get up very early to make breakfast for me and in the evening you always wait until I go to bed. When I have problems, you are always patient and listen to me carefully. You often offer me lots of valuable suggestions. If I have difficulty with my lessons, you spend a lot of time explaining difficult points to me. In order to make me relaxed, you often take me for a trip or do sports with me at the weeked.(When I am ill, you always worry about me and take me to the hospital.? Dear Mum and Dad, thank you for your care and hard work. I decide to work hard and try my best to make great progress in the future. I will help you do more housework at homeh. (When you are old, I will take good care of you and spare more time for you.? I wish you young and happy all the time. I will love you forever. With love Li Lei 書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 評(píng)分細(xì)則： 先根據(jù)文章整體內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)確定檔次，然后在該檔次內(nèi)評(píng)出分?jǐn)?shù)。 第五檔（15~13分） 完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想清楚，內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，具有邏輯性。允許個(gè)別語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 第四檔（12~10分） 符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想基本清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿(mǎn)足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫。有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。 第三檔（9~7分） 基本符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，內(nèi)容基本完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言欠通順。 第二檔（6~4分） 部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，內(nèi)容不完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤很多，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。 第一檔（3~0分） 與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達(dá)自己的思想。只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ)，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識(shí)，提高自我保護(hù)能力，某校開(kāi)展了以安全為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。注意：1)內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3)詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go badHow to keep safe?As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.How to keep safe?As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are someof my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is ing, and we must remember it39。s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must e first !試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文只給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中要注意從四個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，并自己補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連接詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系