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deI want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to e to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it e true.十四、I like the InternetThe Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send s and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet. The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?十五、The InternetThe Internet is being more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play puter games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot . 十六、ComputerComputer is a wonderful machine. It39。s a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest puter is as big as a notebook. We call it pocket puter. Computer bees more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.十七、The importance of waterOf all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . Some factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have bee so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves .十八、WaterWater is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to all living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.十九、I like sportsI feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible .二十、Introduce yourselfMy name is Li Lei . I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000 . I’m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and puter. I’m very happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much .二十一、My best friendMy best friend is He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .中考英語作文十大常見錯(cuò)誤分析 如2004年中考作文要求寫一項(xiàng)最喜歡的課外活動(dòng),有些考生將作文的主題定位為我最喜歡的活動(dòng),偏離了一項(xiàng)、課外活動(dòng)這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評(píng)分原則,若文章內(nèi)容不切題,則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確,都會(huì)被判為零分?! ∑磳懯强忌鷳?yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功,但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯(cuò)誤。有拼寫錯(cuò)誤的作文肯定會(huì)被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼寫錯(cuò)誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差,同時(shí)也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá),通常會(huì)降低作文的檔次?! 。骸 ≌`Myfatherandmymotherisallteacher. 正Myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers. 在漢語中沒有動(dòng)詞的句子是允許的,但英語中每個(gè)完整的句子都必須有動(dòng)詞來構(gòu)成,如:我累了。這個(gè)句子沒有動(dòng)詞作謂語,而用形容詞,但英語形容詞不能作謂語,一定要寫成:I39。mtired. 誤IhappyIcanetoBeijingZoo. 正IamhappyIcanetoBeijingZoo. 39。lltakesome. 39。lltakesome. 、冠詞等 還有一些考生因?yàn)闆]有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法,不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同,也會(huì)出現(xiàn)明顯的錯(cuò)誤,造成丟分現(xiàn)象?! ≌`Becauseheavyrainwecan39。tholdthesportsmeeting. 正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan39。tholdthesportsmeeting. 英語中代詞的形式很多,包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分;此外漢語中很多時(shí)候不用物主代詞,而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的,代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯(cuò)誤?! ≌`ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforIfather. 正MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather. 有的考生因?yàn)閷?duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí)模糊,所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象,這也是造成失分的原因之一?! ?myfriendinhighschool. (這段文章的第二句話沒有動(dòng)詞,他不能獨(dú)立構(gòu)成一個(gè)句子。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤,修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。) 正Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool. 所謂不一致,包括數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等. ,hecandowhathewanttodo. (人一旦有了知識(shí),他就能想干什么就干什么.) 剖析:one是單數(shù)第三人稱,因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has。同理,want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致. 改為Whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants(todo) 、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯(cuò)誤 漢語動(dòng)詞無時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化,而對(duì)英語來說,這些都至關(guān)重要。例: 誤WhenIgettothestationthetrainleave. 正WhenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft. : 綜合性錯(cuò)誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的錯(cuò)誤等,以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時(shí)知識(shí)的積累,所以考生應(yīng)該從平時(shí)練習(xí)出發(fā),每天堅(jiān)持寫英語日記,多讀適合自