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eople argue that we should read extensively, for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields. In my opinion, both sides are going to extremes. 欣賞一下 Ladies and gentlemen, Wele to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Wele to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③ . People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better life than before . 書面表達 : Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ . ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧ . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the schoolage children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it. ⑩ Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the schoolage children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay here the newly built teaching building / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 如何使書面表達更加優(yōu)美流暢 ? Elegance Coherence