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an early age is neither necessary nor beneficial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s selfimprovement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and livin g on his own.題目:愛是人類普遍而偉大的感情,請以“l(fā)ove”為題,寫一篇100單詞左右的英語小短文。文章每一段的前一句話已經(jīng)給出。1Love plays an important part in this world love between you and your parents is a specials love.3There are other kinds of love.【范文】LoveLove plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society,relationship between people are being looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in love between you and your parents is a special one. This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children39。s lives. It will remain with them and help them overe all the difficulties and make them feel are other kinds of love. Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.【評語】該文邏輯清晰,詞語簡練,先從“愛”的普遍意義談起,說到“愛”的含義,“愛”對我們的重要。在第二段里又重點(diǎn)地談了談父母和孩子之間的“愛”,然后結(jié)尾處點(diǎn)到了其他種類的“愛”。有序有節(jié),完整精干。并不是好文章必須追求艱澀的詞語,平易的語言只要運(yùn)用得當(dāng),也會有極好的效果。作文地帶提綱:1. 現(xiàn)在有越來越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員 2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因你的看法● 審題概述本文是一篇論述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員人數(shù)增多的原因和對此的看法。第一段,主要綜述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。第二段,側(cè)重分析引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段,重點(diǎn)談自己對此的觀點(diǎn)?!緟⒖挤段摹緾raze for Civil Service ExaminationsEvery year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of being government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fastgrowing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s a lso gaining popularity among science and engineering students. In the final analysis,this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors –ambitions and forts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable ine, enviable healthcare and pension programs, as well as other forts of lif e, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy. Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The freshfaced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.