【正文】 for my part, public facilities will enhance the economic development and enable the government to sponsor arts.12. 譬如說，投資交通系統(tǒng)可以讓人們上下班容易，提高生產力，而投資高鐵和飛機場可以讓物品運輸更加方便。 For instance, investment in transportation system makes urban mute easier, while investment in highspeed rail and airport makes good transportation more convenient. 13. 有了這些設施，城市可以吸引投資，變得更加富裕，人們生活更好。The city can attract more investments with these facilities and thus people will embrace a richer and better life.14. 相比之下，投資藝術很多時候在短時間很難獲得一個好的經濟回報。On the contrary, investment in art is hard to receive an economic reward in a short run.15. 因此，我認為即便藝術讓我們的城市更加美麗，我認為政府的重心應該是在公共設施上。 As a result, even though art makes our city more beautiful, I insist that the government should lay emphasis on public services and facilities.顧家北句1 Citizens hold different views about government sponsorship towards the art, especially when facing budget problems.改：這個分詞結構有歧義，不大清楚是修飾government，還是citizens正：People have different views about government funding for the arts, especially when a country struggles with budget deficits. 句2 I reckon that we should give priority to infrastructures and then to invest in the art when having a surplus.改：to invest 不清楚是否和前面的to對稱，因為前面的to是個介詞正：I reckon that we should give priority to essential services and infrastructures and then fund the arts when governments have a budget surplus. 句3 Many people support to provide funds on arts, which can make our cities more appealing and attractive.改：沒有support to的表達。 funds on 也不是習慣的表達正：Many people support the public funds for the arts, which can make our cities more visually attractive. 句4 The work of art such as sculptures, painting and statues can make public places like library, metro station and even bathroom pretty. 改：library 這些名詞都是可數名詞，要加復數正：It is true that artworks, including sculptures, paintings and statues can decorate public facilities such as libraries, metro stations, or even toilets, and increase the artistic appeal of these places.句5 If the art industry developed prosperously, and the different buildings of cities also have the unique styles. And for the reason, we will enjoy the city life better. 改：developed時態(tài)不對；第一句話沒有主句，有兩個連詞，正：If the art industry prospers, cities have a mix of different architectural styles and we are more likely to enjoy urban life. 句6 If we are exposed to art, it can decrease our pressure and make our mood well.改：well是個副詞，一般make something+形容詞正：Exposure to artworks can reduce our pressure and put us in a good mood. 句7 Though the art is very important, many people think the public facilities should be focused more and should get the government sponsorship firstly.改：focused more一般不這么表達；如果是art單獨寫，不需要用定冠詞正：Although the funding for the arts is important, many people would argue that public facilities deserve more of public money. 句8 Ordinary people are more interested in public facilities(such as water and electricity power, schools, libraries，roadways),which has a direct impact on their living standards.改：一般當你列舉幾個名詞的時候，要用and相連；定語從句的has和前面的名詞不一致正：Ordinary people are more interested in public facilities (such as water and electricity supply networks, schools, libraries and roads), which have a direct impact on their living standards.句9 For example, good sanitation and clean water can improve people’s fitness and reduce disease and schools and libraries can popularize knowledge and give people a promising career.改：disease可數名詞，最好用復數；schools前面的and不恰當，因為太多并列的成分正：For example, good sanitation and clean water can improve people’s health and reduce diseases, while schools and libraries can disseminate knowledge and improve young people’s job prospects. 句10 In contrast, works of art, such as paintings and operas, are luxury items to most people and are not likely to bring them tangible benefits.改：operas不是works of art， 所以不能作為works of art的例子正：In contrast, sculptures, paintings and operas are luxury items to most people and are not likely to bring tangible benefits to them.句11 From my perspective, governments need to support the public facilities first, and this can promote the economic development.改：public facilities, economic development前面都不用加the，因為不用特指正：In my view, improvements in public facilities can promote economy development so that the government can have enough money to invest in art.句12 For example, investment in transport system make it easy for people to go to work, so the productivity can be improved, while investment in highspeed rails and airports can make transportation more easier.改：system可數名詞，要用冠詞；investment make主謂不一致；more easier沒有這個表達正：For example, the investment in the transport system can improve the productivity of working people by making daily muting easier, while the public spending on highspeed railway systems and airports can ensure that cargo can be delivered faster. 句13 As a result, cities can attract investment and bee wealthy, people’s living standards can also be improved.改：兩個句子沒有連詞正：Cities can attract investment and bee wealthy, so people’s living standards can also be improved.句14 By contrast, people are hard to get a good economic feedback by investing arts in a short time.改：人不能說hard to；invest是不及物動詞，不能不加介詞正：By contrast, the investment in the arts cannot create such returns in a short time.句15 Therefore, I think the government should focus on developing public facilities rather than art even it is useful to make our city more charming. 改：even是副詞，不是連詞；沒有something is useful to do something的說法正：To sum up, I believe that the government should focus on services and facilities vital to the wellbeing of the general public, even though artistic projects have made our cities spectacular.Around the world, more adults can work from home and more children can study from home as puter technologies bee cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?Since puter has found its way