【導(dǎo)讀】很好地完成了試題規(guī)定地任務(wù)。能寫明全部或絕大部分內(nèi)容要點；行文連貫，表達清楚；語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯選用恰當、豐富；有效采用不同連接手段，層次清楚，格式和語域恰當。內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。Coherence:文理通順，前后連貫。Straight:開門見山，直來直去。Punctuation:正確適時使用標點符號。動詞時態(tài)要正確、一致、變化合理。生作文中嚴重的中文思維和漢化的英語。此外，語言錯誤的普。遍性和嚴重性十分驚人，比如，主謂不一致，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)不分，動詞時態(tài)語態(tài)濫用，常用詞拼寫錯誤比比皆是。論和方法，以及最基本的單句寫作能力。期得不到明顯提高的主要原因是欠缺寫好單句的能力。在單句中也是先中心，將主要思想、結(jié)果放在。語中出現(xiàn)“多枝共干”式的長句，復(fù)合句。達方式等語用規(guī)則。學(xué)生無話可說的一條有效途徑。多練習(xí)才能練好。

　　

【正文】 on,…. The mobile phone is more and more popular, many teenagers have their own phones. Now my mobile phone is Philips 535. I think having a mobile phone is very fashionable. And since mobile phones are getting cheaper, most people can buy one. Your mobile phone is like a status symbolit says if you are cool or not. What phone you have says a lot about you to some people these days. If your mobile phone is oldfashioned, behind the times, and outdated, you will be ashamed for your old phone. But mobile phones will harm people’s physical health. In a word, I am glad to be like my friends who all have mobile phone. My mobile phone helps me a lot. Dear Helen, (優(yōu)） I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement. I am a girl of the same age with you. And I e from a happy and warm family, which includes my father, my mother, my sister and I. I am studying in a key school far from my hometown, but I never regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collection and I have colleted more than three thousand stamps. I also like swimming, playing tennis and some other sports. I wish that one day we could be good friends. Yours Truly, Wang Lin 頭腦風(fēng)暴 閱讀體驗 學(xué)習(xí)寫作 When I was a little girl, I used to be outgoing and lovely. Also, I used to be very happy, Do you think so? When I was in the kindergarten, I was taller than before, but I was still shy. I used to like to listen to pop music. I used to like to play some games that were very exciting. And I really wanted to be a pathfinder at that time. When I was in the primary school, I used to have long hair,I used to be a little childish and I used to be afraid of speaking in front of a lot of people. Also I used to be afraid of the dark and high places. Now I have short hair and I am more outgoing than before. And I don’t want to be a pathfinder anymore, and I want to be a translator or a puter programmer. Also I am afraid of being alone, because I don’t like being lonely. Everyone expects a bright future, and so do I. Although I know it’s not easy, I believe myself. Also I must set some aims, right? 閱讀 頭腦風(fēng)暴 開放寫作 Hello, everybody,my name is Kanny. See, I’m a cat, but not a mon cat. Now ,let me tell you something about my childhood. ………… I used to be a lovely kitten I used to be very small I used to have brown soft hair I used to have little red nose Everyone used to like me ‘cause I used to be clever and little My dad wasn’t a good father Because he used to drink a lot I don’t like a drunk father So I left him forever But I used to be lucky Because I have a good brother We used to run in the field under the light We used to play like two little knights We used to have happy time all However , he now bees a round ball . So he’s unhappy. But we must say,”they all has passed.” I’m still a happy cat! 周記 摘抄 資源渠道多方面 增加閱讀量 手抄報 每天一個詞匯或句子的積累 . . It is never too old to learn. I enjoy making mistakes 深入挖掘 3a內(nèi)容 3a仿寫 口頭作文