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s ugges t i ons/ advi ce on t hi s pr obl em . I f I w er e y ou,I w oul d spe nd l es s t i m e pl a y i ng put er gam es . I w oul d l i ke t o sugge st t hat y ou shoul d m ake m or e f r i ends . I w o ul d l i ke t o sha r e w i t h y o u m y v i ew s on how t o deal w i t h st r es s . Y ou s houl d sa y sor r y t o y our par ent s . Y ou can p ai nt t he w al l bl ue,beca use bl u e can m ake y ou r el ax . 考點(diǎn)必研探究 中考話題作文 滿分作文 Dear Zhang Lin, Thanks for your am very happy to give you some advice. First,you must say sorry to your parents and about your problems with you are in trouble,your parents and friends will always be may help ,you should spend some time listening to soft music,reading books or doing some can make you ,try to paint your bedroom color can help you be calm and peaceful. I know that your problems make you feel upset. I hope my advice can help you. Best wishes, Susan 考點(diǎn)必研探究 中考話題作文 名師點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文正文部分分三層給對(duì)方提出建議 ,層次分明 ,條理清楚 ,中心突出。 出彩點(diǎn) :say sorry to,talk about,listen to等短語(yǔ)和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、祈使句和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的使用充分體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力和嫻熟的寫(xiě)作技巧。 考點(diǎn)必研探究 中考話題作文 對(duì)應(yīng)訓(xùn)練 (2022四川綿陽(yáng) ) 假定你是班長(zhǎng)李華 ,請(qǐng)回復(fù)新同學(xué) Mike的求助郵件 ,給他至少 3條建議并說(shuō)明理由。詞數(shù) 80~100,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出 ,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 To:Li Hua From:Mike Hi Li Hua, You know I am new found it hard for me to get along well with people I have trouble with my study,I don’t know how to get really want to be a good part of the you please give me some advice? I am looking forward to your reply. Mike 考點(diǎn)必研探究 中考話題作文 To:Mike From:Li Hua Hi Mike, Because you’re new there,it’s normal to have these should try to get along with them and take an active part in their can help you keep good should be friendly to believe if you smile at them,they will smile for your study,you should consult your teachers and classmates is a saying:“There must be one out of three who can be your teacher.”Therefore,it is important to ask more addition,you should help them more so that you can help each ’m sure you’ll be one of them. Li Hua