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nged people’ s life. It’ s hard to imagine what our life will be like without these inventions. 翻譯: 經(jīng)典亮句積累 開頭句 1. More and more inventions are changing people’ s life.越來越多的發(fā)明正改變著人們的生活。 2. I think...is the most useful …… 是最有用的發(fā)明。 中間句 1. It can help us get information 快速獲取信息。 2. It can teach us what to 。 3. It is very easy to 。 4. It isn’ t very 。 結(jié)尾句 1. We should make full use of 。 2. We can learn better and better in the 在將來學(xué)得越來越好。 典例運(yùn)用 【 例 】 以 “ The invention that is the most useful” 為題寫一篇短文,介紹一下你認(rèn)為最有用的一項(xiàng)發(fā)明。詞數(shù):90左右。提示:描述生活中最有用的發(fā)明是什么;為什么。 【 審題指導(dǎo) 】 1.采用總 — 分 — 總結(jié)構(gòu),介紹最有用的發(fā)明,說明發(fā)明有用性的原因,最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。 2.此文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 【擬定提綱】 【我的作品】 —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— The invention that is the most useful The invention that is the most useful Now there are lots of inventions around the world, such as bikes, puters, have changed the world a all the inventions, I think the electronic dictionary is the most useful. Why? First, it is convenient and can help us to look up the , it is very easy to carry. We can take it with us , it isn’t very expensive, so most students can afford should make full use of it, and then we can learn better and better in the future. 范文借鑒 借鑒點(diǎn) 總體評(píng)價(jià): 這篇文章介紹了作者在所有的發(fā)明物中最喜歡電子詞典,并清楚條理地寫了電子詞典最有用的原因。 精彩亮點(diǎn): 最后一句話 “ We should make full use of it, and then we can learn better and better in the future.” 告知讀者應(yīng)充分利用好發(fā)明,為將來學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ),對(duì)學(xué)生有很好的教育意義。