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t r ai n o r t he pl ane . Y ou can s ee t he s ea of cl o ud s,w ondr ous pi nes , uni que r oc ks a nd so on . D on ’ t m i ss w at chi ng t he s un r i si ng . 滿分作文 Mount Huang is one of the most famous mountains in lies in the south of year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit ’ s not far from takes you about three hours to get there by can also go there by train or by you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy the sea of clouds,wondrous pines and unique rocks around the early morning when the sun rises,the sky looks very ’ s really a nice place to visit. 名師點評 本文是說明文。文章分為三部分。第一部分 :開頭引出話題 ,介紹黃山。第二部分 :分別介紹黃山的地理位置、交通及風景名勝等。第三部分 :最后一句總結(jié)全文。 出彩點 :one of the most famous,far from,by train,by plane,in the early morning等短語和形容詞最高級的使用 ,充分體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭語言的能力和嫻熟的寫作技巧。 對應訓練 假如你是李華 ,你的澳大利亞好友 Tom打算寒假來中國旅行 ,同時也想了解我國的民俗風情和生活方式。為幫助他更好地了解中國 ,請根據(jù)表格信息 ,給他寫一封電子郵件做介紹。 地理環(huán) 境及氣候狀況 中國在澳大利亞以北 。 冬季寒冷 , 北方還下雪 。 夏季炎熱。 生活方式 第一次見面時握手 。 用筷子吃飯 。 交通便利。 民俗風情 春節(jié)是中國最大的節(jié)日 。 家人團聚 。 吃餃子 。 走親訪友等 。 小孩還有紅包。 提示詞 : 在 …… 北方 (to the north of) 握手 (shake hands) 吃飯 (have meals) 交通 (transportation) 訪友 (visit friends) 紅包 (Red Packets) 注意 : 80~100,可適當發(fā)揮 。 ,不計入總詞數(shù) 。 。 Dear Tom, I am very glad to hear that you are going to visit China this winter let me introduce China to you. China is to the north of winter it’s very cold and always snowy in the summer it’s very hot. We shake hands when we meet someone for the first have meals with transportation here is can travel easily. Spring Festival is the biggest festival in get together and have always visit friends during the get Red Packets in Spring Festival. Wish you have a good trip in China! Yours, Li Hua