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【正文】 Weak Passive: What awaits him when a door is opened by him is known by no man. Surprises may be harbored in even the most familiar room. Strong Active: No man knows what awaits him when he opens a door。 Even the most familiar room may harbor surprises. Weak Passive: The great challenge of this Conference is to give voice to women everywhere whose experiences are not noticed and whose words are not heard by the rest of the world. Strong Active: The great challenge of this Conference is to give voice to women everywhere whose experiences go unnoticed and whose words go unheard. Weak Passive: This project has been benefited from many outstanding contributors who have worked with exceptional care and devotion. Strong Active: This project has the benefit of many outstanding contributors who have worked with exceptional care and devotion. 特殊情況 : 如果動作的承受方比動作的實施者更為重要，則采用被動語態(tài)則更為有力。（目的在于強調(diào)行為的承受者或忽略動作的實施者） Good Passive: All the buildings were destroyed during the bombing （強調(diào)動作的承受者） Good Passive:I resent being spoken to so rudely. (說話者對此行為十分反感，并不針對某個人 ) Good Passive:Any person who attempts to escape will be shot. (旨在強調(diào) ) Good Passive:Apples are grown in Michigan, so are blueberries. (突出水果 ) Good Passive:Much has been written and much has been said, but nothing has been done. （雖然未出現(xiàn)動作的發(fā)出者，但被動語態(tài)更可?。? Good Passive:Scott Fitzgerald had written that his contemporaries grew up to find all Gods dead, all wars fought, all faiths in man shaken. (斜體字部分的被動語氣用作形容詞，可與 dead保持平行 ) 2020 年 12 月大學(xué)英語六級寫作： and 和松散句 Rambling Sentences and the ubiquitous and and和松散句 松散句在文章中隨處可見，難以消亡。松散句在語法上并沒錯誤，它只是太長，且干擾讀者對文章的理解，不幸的是，犯有此類毛病的作者往往屢見不鮮。對此可遵循一條好的原則：如果發(fā)現(xiàn)一個句子長及兩到三行，則仔細(xì)考慮兩遍，它很可能要徹底改動。 Rambling: The plane was ready to take off。 having never traveled by plane before he suddenly felt nervous as the sky ominously turned from gray to black, and threatening bolts of lightning shot across the sky, and thunder echoed in the distance. Better: The plane was ready to take off. He had never traveled by plane and suddenly felt nervous as the sky turned ominously from gray to black. Threatening bolts of lightening shot across the sky, and thunder echoed in the distance. Rambling: We regret to inform you that inclement weather conditions in our area have caused us to reschedule all deliveries for the month of February so that we must also reschedule shipment of your order to February 16. Better: I’m sorry to let you know that a winter storm will delay shipment of your order until February 16. 松散句經(jīng)常有很多 and。在口語中，尚可多用幾個 and 但若過多地出現(xiàn)在書面英語中，則令人難以接受。取代 and的方法是改用逗號或從屬結(jié)構(gòu)，或者干脆省略。 Plain: The Governor of Hong Kong descended the long and winding staircase. Interesting: The Governor of Hong Kong descended the long, winding staircase. Plain: My grandparents spent long summer hours under the old, tall and shady tree in the courtyard. Interesting: My grandparents spent long summer hours under the old, tall, shady tree in the courtyard. Plain: By attending this workshop, you will learn just which cosmetic essentials you need and which formulas are just your style. Interesting: By attending this workshop, you will learn just which cosmetic essentials you need, which formulas are just your style. Plain: To a man harassed by a nagging wife and undisciplined children, work away from home can be a great blessing, and a wele escape. Interesting: To a man harassed by a nagging wife and undisciplined children, work away from home can be a great blessing, a wele escape. Ineffective: The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world, and in the springtime it occasionally overflows its banks, and many people are endangered. Improved: The Yangtze River, one of the longest rivers in the world, occasionally endangers many people during the springtime by overflowing its banks. Ineffective: The village had a population of seven thousand, and a typhoon struck it, and it was practically demolished. Improved: The village, with its seven thousand people, was struck by a typhoon and practically demolished. Ineffective: He was the mayor of the town, and he was a genial fellow, and he invited the four young boys into his study. Improved: The mayor of the town, a genial fellow, invited the four young boys into his study. Ineffective: The central plain holds Switzerland’s major manufactur