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ics when I first began to learn it in my eighth grade. I couldn’t understand the teacher well in class and I didn’t dare to ask questions. After Lily knew it, she offered to help me with it. She showed me the right ways to study physics and explained the plex problems to me patiently. With her help, I made much progress and was able to follow my teacher. Lily is really a good friend. I hope she could also pay more attention to her health besides studying hard. And I wish her happy forever.【解析】這是一篇材料作文。介紹自己印象最深的一位同學(xué),人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng),首先介紹這位同學(xué)的姓名,年齡,愛(ài)好和性格特征,要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)描述,注意主謂一致。在第二段要去介紹印象最深的一件事情,可根據(jù)所提供的短語(yǔ)去組織內(nèi)容,時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí),最后一段給自己的同學(xué)提出中肯的建議,同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。13.I’m a 15yearold middle school student in the countryside. My parents are always busy with the farm work. So doing housework after school is quite normal for me. Last winter holiday, my grandmother suddenly fell ill and my parents had to send her to the hospital in the city. I was left at home alone for almost two weeks. Every day, I woke up early in the morning, then fed the animals and cleaned the yard. Besides,I had to do my homework and cooked meals for myself.When my parents came back from the hospital, they were quite surprised to see everything was all right. I think it’s our duty to help our parents do the housework. It can make us understand our parents better and improve the relationship between us.【解析】這是一篇命題作文,讓我們記敘一次自己做家務(wù)或?qū)W做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷,時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。內(nèi)容是開(kāi)放式的,我們需要自己發(fā)揮想象力,詳細(xì)的記敘一次做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷,包括起因、過(guò)程和結(jié)果;最后是父母對(duì)自己的評(píng)價(jià)以及自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要把所提供的英語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)全部用上,同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。14.I will graduate this July. Looking back on my three years of junior high school, I feel rich inside. Not only did I learn much knowledge, but also I made a lot of friends and had a great time.I still remembered that I helped one of my classmates who was not good at English, especially grammar. So I helped her learn grammar for about one hour every day. At last, she made great progress and she was grateful for me. I felt very happy that I could do something good for others.Now, I am going to enter senior high school. I will go on studying hard and get along well with my classmates.【解析】這篇作文是以初三即將畢業(yè)為情景,通過(guò)分析可知,畢業(yè)的時(shí)候,是一個(gè)離別的時(shí)候,這個(gè)時(shí)候?qū)蠋熣f(shuō)的應(yīng)該是感謝和祝福,感謝老師的辛勤培育;對(duì)同學(xué)們說(shuō)的是過(guò)去三年在一起的回憶,還有對(duì)未來(lái)生活的期盼。所以我們要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些感情正確的表達(dá)出來(lái),句式表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)規(guī)范,語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確。當(dāng)然我們要使用好的句式或者連詞,使整篇短文意思連貫,表達(dá)流暢。根據(jù)內(nèi)容的需要,這篇短文中應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài),注意不同時(shí)態(tài)的變化。15.Among all the modern inventions, laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. With a laptop, I can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can enable me to get the latest information whenever I want. Besides, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through and at any time and in any place.I used to study in a faraway place, so I always felt lonely and missed my family and friends very much. But since I got my laptop, I could chat with them and even see them every day. I really like my laptop. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.【解析】考生要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。首先要闡明自己的觀點(diǎn),選擇自己最喜歡的一種發(fā)明,然后根據(jù)英文要點(diǎn)提示,闡述喜歡這種發(fā)明的理由,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主,同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒:考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況,有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛:重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ):Among all the modern inventions 在所有的現(xiàn)代發(fā)明中;get the latest information 獲取最新消息;get to the Internet 上網(wǎng)。高分句型:1. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21 st century.我認(rèn)為它是21世紀(jì)最讓人感到驚異的發(fā)明.(I think后面跟賓語(yǔ)從句)2. I can keep in touch with my friends and family through s and at any time and in any place 我可以通過(guò)電子郵件和隨時(shí)隨地于朋友家人保持聯(lián)系。(keep in touch with和…保持聯(lián)系)答案第9頁(yè),總9