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文就是要證實(shí)這種結(jié)果。We aim to test the feasibility (reliability) of the ...It is hoped that the qutestion will be resolved (fall away) with our proposed method (approach).二、提出自己的觀點(diǎn)在提出自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí),采取什么樣的策略很重要。不合適的句子通常會(huì)遭到reviewer的置疑。1)如果觀點(diǎn)不是這篇文章最新提出的,通常要用We confirm that...2)對(duì)于自己很自信的觀點(diǎn),可用We believe that...3)在更通常的情況下,由數(shù)據(jù)推斷出一定的結(jié)論,用: Results indicate, infer, suggest, imply that...4) 在極其特別的情況才可以用We put forward (discover, observe..) .. for the first time.來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的創(chuàng)新。5) 如果自己對(duì)所提出的觀點(diǎn)不完全肯定,可用We tentatively put forward (interrprete this to..)Or The results may be due to / caused by / attributed to / resulted from..Or This is probably a consequence ofIt seems that .. can account for (interpret) this..Or It is pisible that it stem from...三、圈定自己的研究范圍前言的另外一個(gè)作用就是告訴讀者包括(reviewer)你的文章主要研究?jī)?nèi)容。如果處理不好,reviewer會(huì)提出嚴(yán)厲的建議,比如你沒(méi)有考慮某種可能性,某種研究手段等等。為了減少這種爭(zhēng)論,在前言的結(jié)尾你就要明確提出本文研究的范圍:1)時(shí)間尺度問(wèn)題如果你的問(wèn)題涉及比較長(zhǎng)的時(shí)序,你可以明確地提出本文只關(guān)心這一時(shí)間范圍的問(wèn)題。We preliminarily focus on the older (younger)...或者有兩種時(shí)間尺度的問(wèn)題 (longterm and short term),你可以說(shuō)兩者都重要,但是本文只涉及其中一種2) 研究區(qū)域的問(wèn)題和時(shí)間問(wèn)題一樣,明確提出你只關(guān)心這一地區(qū)四、最后的原場(chǎng)在前言的最后,還可以總結(jié)性地提出,這一研究對(duì)其它研究的幫助。或者說(shuō),further studies on ... will be summarized in our next study (or elsewhere)總之,其目的就是讓讀者把思路集中到你要討論的問(wèn)題上來(lái)。減少爭(zhēng)論(arguments).注意事項(xiàng):一定要注意絕對(duì)不能全面否定前人的成果,即使在你看來(lái)前人的結(jié)論完全不對(duì)。這是前人工作最起碼的尊重,英文叫做給別人的工作credits.所以文章不要出現(xiàn)非常negative的評(píng)價(jià),比如Their results are wrong, very questionable, have no mensence, etc.遇到這類(lèi)情況,可以婉轉(zhuǎn)地提出:Their studies may be more reasonable if they had considered this situation.Their results could be better convinced if they ...Or Their conclusion may remain some uncertanties.討論部分討論部份包括什么內(nèi)容?1. 主要數(shù)據(jù)特征的總結(jié)2. 主要結(jié)論以及與前人觀點(diǎn)的對(duì)比3. 本文的不足事實(shí)上給出文章的不足恰恰是保護(hù)自己文章的重要手段。如果刻意隱藏文章的漏洞,覺(jué)得別人看不出來(lái),是非常不明智的。所謂不足,包括以下內(nèi)容:1. 研究的問(wèn)題有點(diǎn)片面討論時(shí)一定要說(shuō),It should be noted that this study has examined only..We concentrate (focus) on only...We have to point out that we do not..Some limitations of this study are...2. 結(jié)論有些不足The results do not imply,The results can not be used to determinebe taken as evidence ofbe taken as evidence ofUnfortunately, we can not determien this from this dataOur results are lack of ...但是,在指出這些不足之后,隨后一定要再一次加強(qiáng)本文的重要性以及可能采取的手段來(lái)解決這些不足,為別人或者自己的下一步研究打下浮筆。Notwithstading its limitation, this tudy does suggest..However, these problems culd be solved if we consdierDespite its preliminary character, this study can clearly indicate..用中文來(lái)說(shuō),這一部份是左右逢源。把審稿人想到的問(wèn)題提前給一個(gè)交代,同時(shí)表明你已經(jīng)在思考這些問(wèn)題,但是由于文章長(zhǎng)度,試驗(yàn)進(jìn)度或者試驗(yàn)手段的制約,暫時(shí)不能回答這些問(wèn)題。但是,這些通過(guò)你的一些建議,這些問(wèn)題在將來(lái)的研究中游可能實(shí)現(xiàn)。9 / 9