【正文】 fall in love after divided school, will BT after divided school.” 用引語的 3個不允許之 3 ? 不允許打腫臉愣充名人。 ? 例如本來是鄰居王大爺說的，一想很有道理，說成是某哲學家說的。 文章開頭之定義法 ? 給題目中某個概念下定義，圍繞你下的定義進行討論，即定一下一個前提； ? 優(yōu)點：適當創(chuàng)新，突出個性； ? 缺點：定義偏差大，人們不能接受；很多題目不適合下定義。 定義法舉例 ? 舉例 1：老師的親和力更重要，還是學術(shù)能力更重要？ 文章開頭之混合法 ? “背問引定”四種方法可以結(jié)合起來用，使開頭內(nèi)容豐富； ?缺點：花費時間多，造成“頭太大”。 結(jié)尾 ? 必須有結(jié)尾； ? 結(jié)尾必須呼應(yīng)主題； ? 結(jié)尾可以提出建議； ? 結(jié)尾可以展望未來。 開頭段論點必須明確 ? Given the topic that…, I have no idea about it. Let’s analyze first and then we may find the answer. ? My dear and clever friend, now you must know what I am thinking, right? ? After a stepbystep discussion, I still fail to hold a opinion. My dear rater/marker, could you please guide me?/I’ll be so appreciated if you can give me the answer. 托福滿分作文應(yīng)考步驟 一、審題 ? 區(qū)分是利弊、事實還是因果，找到相應(yīng)的解題辦法； ? 利弊：萬金由； ? 事實：找事發(fā)原因、拆分舉例、直接舉例； ? 因果：架橋、拆橋、另尋他因、另尋他果； ? 注意題目中的絕對詞和細節(jié)詞，分析何為爭論焦點。 二、簡要提綱 ? 各分論點如何安排？ ? 用何種論證結(jié)構(gòu)？讓步論證還是絕對論證？ ? 最好先記下來，否則容易遺忘。 三、文章開頭 ? 優(yōu)先嘗試簡單描述現(xiàn)象，引出話題； ? 亦可重述原題； ? 擺出雙方觀點的同時給出個人觀點； ? 個人觀點要配合論證結(jié)構(gòu)，中間段落一邊倒，則開頭觀點一邊倒；中間段落讓步，則開頭觀點用讓步句型。 四、文章結(jié)尾 ? 結(jié)尾必須重述主題； ? 結(jié)尾可以提出建議，也可以暢想未來； ? 個人觀點要配合論證結(jié)構(gòu)，中間段落一邊倒，則結(jié)尾觀點一邊倒；中間段落讓步，則結(jié)尾觀點用讓步句型； ? 可以先寫完開頭結(jié)尾，再寫中間段落； ? 開頭結(jié)尾總計 100字左右為宜。 五、支持段寫法 ? 主題句； ? 支持句； ? 舉例及細節(jié)； ? 段內(nèi)小結(jié)； ? 四法合一，威力無窮！ 六、讓步段寫法 ? 主題句四種削弱方法； ? 支持句； ? 舉例及細節(jié)； ? 對讓步內(nèi)容進行削弱和反駁。 范文精講 佳句在手 高分我有 ? 批評讓人們失去信心，對自己持否定態(tài)度。 ? Criticism makes people less confident and hold a negative attitude towards themselves. ? Criticism makes people lose confidence and bee very negative about themselves. ? 相反的，鼓勵會讓人重拾信心，積極對待生活。 ? In contrast/on the contrary, encouragement helps people regain confidence, and perform/behave positively in routine jobs. ? 一個人不應(yīng)該對批評抱消極態(tài)度，因為這樣一種態(tài)度會讓他沒法了解別人是怎樣看他的。 ? One should not take a negative attitude towards criticism, for such an attitude will keep him from knowing what others really think of him. ? 學生做兼職工作是好事情，因為這會幫助年輕人培養(yǎng)自立能力。 ? Students benefit enormously from having parttime jobs, which provide them with good opportunities to live independently in the society. ? It’s good for students to have parttime jobs because this helps cultivate independence among young people. ? 建工廠的好處之一是提高就業(yè)率。 ? One of the benefits brought by building a factory is to enhance the employment rate. ? Among the advantages of building a factory is to enhance the employment rate. ? 兼職工作讓學生對自己更有信心，因為通過工作，他們會意識到自己的價值，同時也會向他們證實：他們現(xiàn)在可以供養(yǎng)自己了。 ? Parttime jobs make students more confident in themselves because through the work, they will realize their own value and prove to others as well as to themselves that they can support their own life now. ? 購買珠寶或許是一種明智的投資，因為它能夠在漫長歲月中保值。 ? Purchasing a piece of jewelry may be a good investment, because its value can stay the same in long term. ? A piece of jewelry sometimes means an advisable investment, since it may value the same after decades. ? 兼職工作可以幫助學生把自己的知識用到實踐中， 反 過來，他們的經(jīng)驗又將會讓他們對教室里和書本上學到的知識了解得更透徹。 ? Parttime jobs can help students put their knowledge into practice, and in turn, their experience will give them a better understanding of what they have learned in classes and books. ? Parttime jobs can help students apply their knowledge in practice, and in turn, their experience will make them know better what they have learned in classes and books. ? 越來越多的寵物已引起了無法解決的衛(wèi)生問題。 ? Pets in growing numbers has raised insoluble hygiene problems. ? A growing number of pets has caused serious hygiene problems that cannot be solved. ? 如今的人們對寵物太過癡迷，癡迷到了甚至忽略照料自己孩子的地步。 ? People nowadays are always fascinated by pets and they even ignore the fact that it is their children that they should focus on. ? People nowadays are so crazy about pets that they even neglect caring for their own children. ? So crazy about the pets are people nowadays that they even neglect caring for their children. ? 電視占用我們太多的時間，我們再也沒有足夠的時間去發(fā)展自己的愛好、參加娛樂活動 ,比如 去劇院、電影院 以及 體育活動了。 ? Television wastes much time and as a result, we do not have adequate time to develop our hobbies and take part in group activities such as going to theatres, cinemas and gymnasia. ? Television takes up too much of our time and we no longer have enough time for hobbies, entertaining activities, and other outside amusement like theatres, cinemas and sports. ? 很多父母用電視作為安撫孩子的工具，常常把孩子放在電視機前面，根本不去管孩子是接觸的垃圾廣告還是暴力場面，只要孩子保持安靜就行了。 ? A lot of parents use television as a pacifier for their children and very often, they simply put their children in front of the televisions and don’t care whether the children are exposed to rubbish mercials or spectacles of violence as long as the children are quiet. ? 現(xiàn)代人常常以工作太忙為理由不關(guān)心家人。 ? People nowadays use too much work as a reasonable excuse for the phenomena that they do not pay much attention on their family members. ? Heavy workload has been made a scapegoat by businessmen for their frequent neglect of family members. ? 電視阻礙了人們彼此間的交流，所以它對家庭成員間的關(guān)系造成了很大的破壞。 ? Television prevents people from municating with each other, so it has done a lot of harm to the relationship between family members. ? Television impedes munication, undermining the relationship between family members. ? 與來自其他文化的游客們的接觸有助于拓寬當?shù)厝说囊曇啊? ? Talking with other tourists from other cultures help widen the horizon of the local people. ? Contacts with tourists from other cultures help widen the horizon of the local people. ? 長相好可以幫助人們在社會交往中給人以更好的印象。 ? A good appearance may impress people better in social contacts. ? A good appearance may help people make a better impression in social contacts. ? 好的父母為孩子樹立了一個可以仿效的榜樣，而糟糕的父母往往不會有規(guī)距的孩子。 ? Parents should be good behavioral models for their c