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【正文】 in my college entrance exam. It’s really a remarkable factor. Having thought twice, difficult as making the final decision is, I choose the Northern University. First, it’s cheaper studying there, so that my parents’ burden of money will relatively light. Second, 20 point is of considerable amount, which will certainly help me in my exam. Although it will enroll only 10 students, I have the confidence to be admitted. 能根據(jù)題目要求，對表格中所提供南北兩所高校的不同方面進行比較，從而作出決定，并結(jié)合個人的實際，比較具體地闡明了自己對各種條件的態(tài)度和想法。表達較流利，錯誤很少，展示出一定的遣詞造句能力，是一篇寫得較好的作文。 (B) Now there are two universities to choose. And the two universities are good. I like them, too. But as far as I am concerned, I will choose the North University. First pared the South University, the North University is cheaper than the South University. My family is not very rich. So I think the North University is better. Secondly, the North University is easier than the South University. The North University can give you 20. The better policy give me confidence. Considering my study is not good, so I will choose the North University. Although the students of North University is less than the students of the South University, I will do my best to get it. In a word, I think the North University suit me. So I will choose the North University. 雖然也按題目要求對兩所學校的三個方面進行了比較，但是不能用正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯準確表達出意思，且內(nèi)容不夠充實，讀上去很單調(diào)。在語言表達上有較多的語法、拼寫及標點符號錯誤。
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