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of, to the west of off the east coast of cover an area of …… square kilometers be made up of / consist of be separated from be surrounded by has a population of ******** ********* ****** Location: northwest of Beijing Area: square kilometers History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction in 1860, AngloFrench Forces invaded Beijing, set fire, took away treasures, ruins, new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s, Yuanmingyuan Park Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the northwest of Beijing. It covers an area of square kilometers. It was built during the Qing Dynasty. After 150 years of construction, it became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world. However, when AngloFrench forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire. Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins. It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected. Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s. The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday. 文章的檢查 時態(tài),詞形,人稱,數(shù),邏輯關(guān)系 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2022. I was walking along Park Road towards to the east 2. ________ when a old man came out of the park on the other 3. ________ side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4. ________ Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. 5. ________ The next moment the car hit a man while he 6. ________ was acrossing the road. He fell with a cry. The 7. ________ car not stop but drove off at great speed heading 8. ________ west. I notice the driver was a young woman, 9. ________ the plate number was AC 864. About two minutes 10. _______ later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 1. in→ on 2. to去掉 3. a 改為 an 4. 正確 5. made改為 make 6. a 改為 an 7. acrossing應為 crossing 8. not前加 did 9. notice→ noticed 10. the plate number前加 and