【正文】 d, when we hunt for job, english level is a deciding ore, i do hope that all of you will have a good understanding of the necessity of learning english luck to you!sincerely yoursli minginternet harmony ，網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個人必不可少的獲取信息的工具，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不和諧的因素，如垃圾信息，黃色網(wǎng)站，虛假新聞，網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等internet harmonythe advent of the internet ushered in a new era of interpersonal munications and business tedly, the net are revolutionizing the daily lives of the people who have an access to primary reason behind the internet boom roots in its range of problems lurking behind the frenzy of internet impressively stand vast majority of internet users’ mail boxes are saturated with junk mails, an issue which sparks strong criticism and generates the loss of corporate websites lure a growing number of young people’s news via the , bbs and chat room increasingly poses a threat to the social prosperity and crack down them, we should push for a more effectively tough should join our forces to launch a nationwide campaign, including imposing stiff penalties on spammers, shutting down or blocking the lewd sites and introducing a realname registration system to curb fraudulent can fully believe that our bined efforts will reap clean cyberspace will paint our lives more and shoppingwith numerous technological advances, various kinds of media have been well a result, an increasing number of people are fond of purchasing goods with the help of media, such as newspapers, radio stations, tv stations and the we know, every coin has two sides and shopping via media is no the one hand, it saves much time, money and effort to purchase goods through media since you don’t have to go to the shops in s, you can choose what you want from an enormous variety of goods on the other hand, you may be cheated sometimes by the false information and suffer a considerable far as i am concerned, shopping via media brings great benefits to our life and our economy on the the same time, we need strengthened supervision over the information released via this way, we can reap more benefits from shopping via media and reduce the possible harm to a when it es to cars ,different people have different people think cars have a lot of the first place ,driving a car could save time ,because pitition is very fierce in this society ,time equal the second place , with private car increasing ,people，life is very facility ,people could go shopping or tourism at their spare ,others people suggest that cars is bad for as: cars will increasing air pollution ,which will influence our life and ile ,cars will make the energy crisis addition to ,with the car growing, a plenty of new drivers don，t abide by traffic regulation ,this lead to traffic my opinion ,we should driving our traffic tools when our work is very ile , we should reduce driving the car when short distance or having a lots of should properly use modern traffic facility ,only thus our life will it es to cars, different people have different people think cars have a lot of advantage（advantages）.for the first place(應(yīng)該是in the first place), driving a car could save（直接把could去掉，變成”driving a car saves time”）time,（這里改成句號）because pitition（petition）is very fierce in this society ,time equal（equals） the second place（直接用secondly就好了）, with private car(改成the number of private car ownership)increasing ,people，life is very facility ,（這一句？？插入語不可以是一個句子噢……）people could（用can就可以了。could表示能力的時候是can的過去式而已，不能再現(xiàn)在時中這么用；表示猜測的時候可以用于現(xiàn)在時，但是表示發(fā)生的可能性很低）go shopping or tourism（改成traveling。tourism是指旅游業(yè)）at their spare ,others people suggest that cars is(改成are)bad for society, such as: cars will increasing air pollution ,which will influence our life and ile ,cars will make the energy crisis increasing（改成worsen）.in addition to（刪掉to）,with the car（改成the number of cars）growing, a（刪掉a）plenty of new drivers don’t abide by traffic regulation ,this（改成which。一個句子里面不能有兩個完整的句子，除非用連詞連接，或者一個是主句一個是從句）lead（leads）to traffic accident（accidents可數(shù)名詞不可以單獨(dú)存在~）.in my opinion ,we should driving（drive。助動詞后面用動詞原形）our traffic tools（改成cars）when our work is very ile, we should reduce driving the car when short distance or having a lots of(改成a lot of) should properly use modern traffic facility, only thus（改成then）our life will colourful.