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也對他身心的影響變化很大,作者改變了自己面對疾病的態(tài)度,可以說是吉爾老師拯救了他。故選C項(xiàng)。54. 考查名詞詞義辨析。句意:回首往事,我真希望我能感謝她給我的生活帶來了如此大的改變。A. decision決定;B. choice選擇;C. difference不同;D. treatment治療。根據(jù)“ changed her world forever. ”可知,作者真希望自己能感謝她給我的生活帶來了如此大的改變。故選C項(xiàng)。55. 考查動(dòng)詞詞義辨析。句意:我仍然記得她教過我的東西:有了耐心和愛,沒有山是不能攀登的。A. taught教;B. bought買;C. warned警告;D. tricked捉弄。根據(jù)“With patience and love, no mountain is too high to climb.”作者仍然記得老師教過自己的東西。故選A項(xiàng)。書面表達(dá) 第一節(jié)Dear jack, I am sorry to hear that you had some conflicts with your parents on subject choosing. But I think there is no need to feel upset, for things like this usually happens to teenagers, you included. Needless to say, the conflict between you and your parents is whether to choose what is beneficial for you or what interests you. As far as I am concerned, if you stick to choosing subject according to your preference, you should explain to your parents patiently and carefully. It is advised that you should tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects, and the perspective of them, which is of great importance. Besides, you should also promise that you will learn what you choose well and make them know your determination. These are the ways I persuaded my parents to allow me to choose what I like. Looking forward to your reply and hoping that you can make up with parents.【解析】【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給朋友Jack寫信,幫他分析和父母發(fā)生沖突的原因并提出和解的建議?!驹斀狻矿w裁:應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu):總分總 要求:1. 寫信目的2. 分析發(fā)生沖突的原因3. 提出和解的建議第二步:列提綱(重點(diǎn)詞組)be sorry to do sth/ there is no need to do sth/ stick to/ explain to sb/ advise sb to do sth/ according to/ persuade sb to do sth/ looking forward to/ make up第三步:連詞成句I am sorry to hear that you had some conflicts with your parents on subject choosing. But I think there is no need to feel upset, for things like this usually happens to teenagers, you included.The conflict between you and your parents is whether to choose what is beneficial for you or what interests you. If you stick to choosing subject according to your preference, you should explain to your parents patiently and carefully. It is advised that you should tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects, and the perspective of them, which is of great importance.You should also promise that you will learn what you choose well and make them know your determination. These are the ways I persuaded my parents to allow me to choose what I like.Looking forward to your reply and hoping that you can make up with parents.第四步:連句成篇(加入銜接詞或從句)表示并列的連詞:and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞:because/ if/ though/ although…定語從句連詞:which/ that/ when/ where…第五步:修改潤色(加入高級詞匯或短語)【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整,要點(diǎn)全面,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句,例如:But I think there is no need to feel upset, for things like this usually happens to teenagers, you ;Needless to say, the conflict between you and your parents is whether to choose what is beneficial for you or what interests ;It is advised that you should tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects, and the perspective of them, which is of great ,why引導(dǎo)定語從句,which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。讀后續(xù)寫He thought for a moment and realized that they were afraid of human beings and would not follow a human. He said to himself, “How can I possibly save them?” Just then, a good idea occurred to his mind. He thought of his geese he raised on his farm. After all, they were relatives. Maybe they were much easier to get along with. He rushed to his geese and drove them to the front of the barn. Then he went back to his house, observing through the window. The cold soon drove his geese into the barn, followed by the swans. His method worked! The swans were safe now!