【正文】 o meet?What can you do there?What do you advise Peter to prepare?Dear Peter,How is it going?This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities in Longhu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua題目②“我們都在努力奔跑, 我們都是追夢人?！庇袎粝刖陀心繕? 有希冀才會奮斗。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“We Are All Dreamers”為主題的征文活動, 假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談談你的夢想是什么？你為什么會有這樣的夢想？為了實現(xiàn)你的夢想, 你打算怎么做？提示詞語：want to be, like, study hard, e true...提示問題：● What39。s your dream and why?● What will you do to make your dream e true?【答案】例文：Dear peter,How is it going?This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 o’clock. We can watch the dragon boat race. It’s very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or your smart phone if you want to take some photos.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Peter寫一封信，邀請他參加端午節(jié)游園活動，告訴我們見面的時間、地點以及要做的活動?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一、三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：This Saturday is……，There will be……，We are going to……，We can watch……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表示我邀請你參加端午節(jié)游園活動，接下來介紹我們見面的時間和地點以及可以做的事，最后期望收到你的回復。此處invite sb to do sth, learn to do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。8．書面表達。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國，指的是對職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計劃的過程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學生，我們也是時候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請以此為主題寫一篇短文。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準備(學習、興趣發(fā)展等)；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準備，最后表示只要我有機會，我將會選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中，主持人在開場白中說道：“我們的一生，會經(jīng)歷很多的第一次，難忘而又寶貴，它意味著我們的成長。”請談談你人生中最難忘的“第一次”，或許是第一次做家務、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說說你從中學到了什么或有哪些收獲。不少于80詞。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名）【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文，需要寫出第一次做某事，人生中有許多第一次，可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻，并且從中學到了許多東西的事件來寫，這樣的話，貼近生活實際，學生有話可說?！驹斀狻勘疚膶懥宋业牡谝淮巫鲲?，先交代背景知識，因為父母不在家，所以我不得不自己動手，動手做的過程中，由于沒有經(jīng)驗，理所當然地失敗了。但是，我不能氣餒，要從失敗中找原因，從哪里跌倒，就從哪里起來，所以，第二周，我讓媽媽教我做菜，獲得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放棄，就能獲得成功?！军c睛】本篇作文貼近實際，每個人都有第一次，挑選一件自己有話可說的來寫即可。但是需要注意文章邏輯，語篇順序，注意連接詞的使用和長短句結合。這樣的話，文章符合英文造句習慣，更容易獲得高分。