【正文】 網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．假如你是韓梅，你的一位英國筆友Kate發(fā)來電子郵件，說她下星期來中國，她向你詢問中國的餐桌禮儀。請你根據(jù)下面提示給她回一封電子郵件，告訴她有關(guān)情況。詞數(shù)80～100。提示：；；；；、健康、成功干杯……Dear kate，I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the chinese table manners.In China. the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can eat until everyone is at the table. Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.Wele to China!Yours,Han Mei【解析】【詳解】本文是書信寫作，注意書信寫作格式，開頭與結(jié)尾。把自己當(dāng)做韓梅，切不可在文中出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)名字等信息。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:；,使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫；,有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型：In 。the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders ，主人不會(huì)先把每道菜都吃完。You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to 。Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or ，你應(yīng)該為主人的長壽、健康或成功干杯?！军c(diǎn)睛】注意寫作過程中，將要點(diǎn)展開并表達(dá)清楚，注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達(dá)。9．書面表達(dá)。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國，指的是對職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進(jìn)行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計(jì)劃的過程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學(xué)生，我們也是時(shí)候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請以此為主題寫一篇短文。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點(diǎn)：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備(學(xué)習(xí)、興趣發(fā)展等)；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機(jī)會(huì)，我將會(huì)選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。