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規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7.書面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息,將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 July 14TimeAugust 15 August 24Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace (白金漢宮) visit the British Museum (大英博物館)watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast (黃金海岸)have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國(guó)家的所有信息及選擇的理由; 2. 結(jié)合游玩國(guó)家的情況,自擬希望可以安排的活動(dòng),并提出12點(diǎn)出游的注意事項(xiàng);3. 文章不少于90詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4. 語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范;5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。8.書面表達(dá)近日,你校迎來一批來自英國(guó)的交流生,學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文,向英國(guó)交流生介紹中國(guó)的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久,享譽(yù)世界。種類種類多樣,各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會(huì)友,饋贈(zèng)親朋。功效有益健康,提神醒腦。影響……(自擬兩點(diǎn))。注意:,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn),根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容,條理清楚,字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤(時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等)。本文提綱:茶是中國(guó)文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久,享譽(yù)世界。中國(guó)有很多種茶。它們中的每一個(gè)都有自己的特點(diǎn)。大多數(shù)中國(guó)人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國(guó)人了解中國(guó),而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力??忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查:?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法::文體,時(shí)態(tài),人稱。:要點(diǎn)是否齊全,適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。:通過增加狀語,定語,連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。,合理使用連詞。:拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤,語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。:注意書寫工整美觀整潔。9.“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動(dòng)?假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語: diligence (勤奮), make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從:你努力工作取得了什么成績(jī)??你是怎么做到的??你覺得怎么樣?這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對(duì)我來說是一個(gè)很大的挑戰(zhàn),因?yàn)槲覍?duì)自己的英語口語沒有那么自信,在公共場(chǎng)合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多,就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級(jí),the+比較級(jí)”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……,就越……”的意思。