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分明,所用句式句型比較高級(jí),像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。書(shū)面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力??忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和高分句式,語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范,信息表達(dá)清晰、完整,意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范:大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查:?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。7.畢業(yè)之際,學(xué)校要求每位九年級(jí)學(xué)生給各自家長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)封信,簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)三年來(lái)初中生活的收獲與存在的問(wèn)題。假如你是Jim,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示,用英文做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的匯報(bào)。收獲1. 學(xué)到很多知識(shí)…2. 學(xué)會(huì)了與人相處:在校...,在家…3. 遇到困難時(shí)…存在問(wèn)題學(xué)習(xí)壓力…目前想法1. 感謝 2…要求:(1):表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;(2):必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(3):不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。(4):詞數(shù)100左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Dear Dad & Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jim【答案】例文Dear Dad & Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.Yours sincerelyJim【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文。在畢業(yè)之際,學(xué)校要求每位九年級(jí)學(xué)生給各自家長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)封信,簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)三年來(lái)初中生活的收獲與存在的問(wèn)題。假如你是Jim,要求根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容,用英文做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的匯報(bào)。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。8.為配合學(xué)校“誠(chéng)信教育”活動(dòng),學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)開(kāi)展了以“Try to be honest”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示,寫(xiě)一篇征文稿。(1)列舉你班同學(xué)存在的不誠(chéng)實(shí)現(xiàn)象:抄作業(yè),考試作弊,說(shuō)謊話(huà)......。(2)簡(jiǎn)述誠(chéng)實(shí)的重要性,并用你的一次具體經(jīng)歷加以說(shuō)明。注意:(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。(2)詞數(shù)100左右。(3)短文首句僅供參考,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。參考詞匯:作弊cheat(v.)說(shuō)謊tell a lieTry to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Try to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest.However, with the development of society, we often hear plaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a fortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people’s delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don’t do that.The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling the treasure mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later bee infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.【解析】這是一篇誠(chéng)信征文,英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài),注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文,要忠實(shí)于材料,不必?cái)U(kuò)展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語(yǔ),慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。9.假設(shè)某英文報(bào)“我愛(ài)寫(xiě)作”欄目為了配合創(chuàng)建“學(xué)習(xí)型城市”,正在舉辦專(zhuān)題英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),以“Lifelong Learning”為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,參加比賽。終身學(xué)習(xí)的意義1.人們上學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)、參加考試,但學(xué)習(xí)不只在學(xué)校;2.學(xué)校畢業(yè),不是學(xué)習(xí)的終止。終身學(xué)習(xí)的途徑去博物館、閱讀書(shū)籍、體育鍛煉、外出旅行終身學(xué)習(xí)的益處考生自擬(至少一點(diǎn))注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順; 3.短文不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Lifelong LearningWhen you finish high school or university,is learning done? The answer is“no.”In many countries,people continue learning all their lives.【答案】When you finish high school or university,is learning done? The answer is“no.”many countries,people continue learning all their lives.Why is lifelong learning important? You go to school and learn.You study.Y take tests.But learning doesn’t only happen in school.And learning doesn’t stop wh you finish high school or university.You are learning all the time.For example,learni can happen when you go to a museum.It can also happen when you read a book.Y learn when you play a sport or when you take a trip.Learning is life! We never st learning.Every day,you can improve yourself by learning something new【解析】試題分析:考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒:考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況,有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確,能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。考點(diǎn):提綱類(lèi)作文