【正文】 bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對(duì)我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議?？偨Y(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。14．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國(guó)家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It39。s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means Nice to meet you, Thank you and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What39。s more, read some books about Chinese customs before ing here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，回信給約翰，建議他在中國(guó)家庭生活應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭告訴他不必?fù)?dān)心，接下來回答他的問題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國(guó)玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式受到?jīng)_擊?！熬W(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”這一新的學(xué)習(xí)模式備受青睞。假設(shè)你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行在線學(xué)習(xí)。以下是你所在班級(jí)的討論情況，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)投稿，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕?。提示：觀點(diǎn)贊成反對(duì)理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和時(shí)間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實(shí)2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用電腦對(duì)眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、讓步狀語從句、動(dòng)名詞作主語等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。16．（福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒有必要。假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問題，接下來介紹我認(rèn)為開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組