【正文】 o arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，敘述事實(shí)的時候以時間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個有機(jī)的整體，同時要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時候，寫作的時候要注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。8．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online。 商品 goods。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．書面表達(dá) 以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項(xiàng)：1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and fortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves? I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。第一句話點(diǎn)題，隨后引出文章的兩個主題，一 remend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to remend is silk show your reasons why you remend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us總結(jié)全篇。文章干凈利落，層次分明。