【正文】 ups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請(qǐng)外教史密斯先生參加英語戲劇展示活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．從下面兩個(gè)題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。題目①假如你是李華，明天下午2:00你要去參加“傳統(tǒng)文化才藝展示”活動(dòng)，因此不能上英語課。請(qǐng)用英文給你們的外教John寫一張請(qǐng)假條，告訴他你要去干什么，為什么要參加這個(gè)活動(dòng)以及你保證按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。提示詞語:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help提示問題:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?Why will you take this activity?How will you finish your homework?Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence from your English ______________________________________________________________Your loring student Li lHua題目②一位好老師，勝過萬卷書。在你的初中生活中，一定會(huì)有一位老師給你留下了深刻印象。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Thank you, my teacher”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，讓更多的人認(rèn)識(shí)你的老師，同時(shí)表達(dá)你對(duì)他/她的感激之情。主要內(nèi)容包括: 哪位老師給你留下了深刻印象，發(fā)生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想對(duì)他/她說些什么。提示詞語：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress提示問題：Which teacher impressed you most?What happened to make you impressed?What do you want to say to him/her?Thank you,my teacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】題目一：Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二：Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，作文要求寫一張請(qǐng)假條，因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時(shí)間和事由均給出，結(jié)合提示問題可知假條主要從三個(gè)方面寫，這三個(gè)方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文，人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是以一般將來時(shí)為主。例文分成三段，根據(jù)提示問題，每段成一行，這種寫法條理清晰，分段明確。高分亮點(diǎn)：ask for；absence from；一般將來時(shí)；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱應(yīng)該為第一人稱。注意給出的提示問題，文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱書寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師，第二段用一般過去時(shí)介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師，第三段表達(dá) “我”的感謝。分段明確，語句簡潔不啰嗦，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用合理。高分亮點(diǎn)：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；want to do sth。9． 《朗讀者》、《中國詩詞大會(huì)》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國人的閱讀情結(jié)。為了激發(fā)市民們的閱讀興趣,廣州開展了“書香羊城”活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)閱讀的看法,并對(duì)如何培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)提出建議。閱讀的好處 閱讀使人睿智補(bǔ)充12個(gè)看法 培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣每天至少閱讀20分鐘補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)觀看《朗讀者》,分享節(jié)目推薦的好作品。補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議注意::《朗讀者》(Readers): 作品: works (n.):(文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)):、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分.The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，內(nèi)容包括提示內(nèi)容以及談?wù)勛约簩?duì)閱讀的看法，并對(duì)培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)方面提出建議，人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，同時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯關(guān)系更為緊密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個(gè)世界，而且能帶給我們幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列連詞短語。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天堅(jiān)持閱讀是一個(gè)好習(xí)慣。Keeping reading every day動(dòng)名詞短語作主語。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after ，我們的教室里還可以設(shè)置一個(gè)讀書角，以便課后隨時(shí)閱讀。此句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，so that引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語從句。