【正文】 考試失利、被別人誤解等）。使你自信，擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語(yǔ)言人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離。參考詞匯： 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文，要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn)，首先要研究表格，找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，然后加以整合，也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫，但要點(diǎn)一定要全，不能漏掉。寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語(yǔ)的影響，要用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語(yǔ)法等問題，用好簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句?？梢杂靡恍└呒?jí)詞匯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。8．書面表達(dá)近年來，人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動(dòng)，如春游、夏令營(yíng)、野餐等。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明，請(qǐng)給鄭校長(zhǎng)發(fā)一封電子郵件，就此發(fā)表自己的看法。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 安全第一，但開展一些戶外活動(dòng)還是有必要的；2. 通過這些活動(dòng)，學(xué)生不僅能增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，還能開拓視野；3. 與大自然親密接觸，能增強(qiáng)同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識(shí)；4. 建議學(xué)校在活動(dòng)之前教給學(xué)生一些安全常識(shí)，讓學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)保護(hù)自己和自救。參考詞匯：outdoor activities戶外活動(dòng)；open up one’s eyes開闊視野注意：1. 詞數(shù)80—100；2. 請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；4. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High School. I’m writing to you about outdoor activities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Zhang Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High school. V m writing to you about outdoor activities.Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us, dear headmaster? Of course, safety es first. But it’s necessary for us to take part in such activities.In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way. What’s more, it’s a good way for us to learn to protect the environment by staying close to the nature. And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.Why not show us some safety knowledge before these activities. It’s a good chance for us to learn to protect and save ourselves.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Ming【解析】【詳解】近年來，人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動(dòng)，如春游、夏令營(yíng)、野餐等。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明，請(qǐng)給鄭校長(zhǎng)發(fā)一封電子郵件，就此發(fā)表自己的看法。這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的度假計(jì)劃本文做給材料比較詳細(xì)，敘述中注意將要點(diǎn)中的事情介紹清楚，可以適當(dāng)取舍。動(dòng)筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時(shí)態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)問題比較復(fù)雜，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問題，人稱主要是第一人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達(dá)的多樣化，做到語(yǔ)意連貫符合邏輯。【點(diǎn)睛】文中用到了一些好的句型，這些句型給文中增色不少，如：Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us；In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way.9．書面表達(dá)。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級(jí)三班的李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動(dòng)，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要點(diǎn)：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。