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1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右,感謝信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示,以 Neil的名義,用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí),注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8.為配合學(xué)校“誠信教育”活動(dòng),學(xué)校英語報(bào)開展了以“Try to be honest”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇征文稿。(1)列舉你班同學(xué)存在的不誠實(shí)現(xiàn)象:抄作業(yè),考試作弊,說謊話......。(2)簡(jiǎn)述誠實(shí)的重要性,并用你的一次具體經(jīng)歷加以說明。注意:(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱。(2)詞數(shù)100左右。(3)短文首句僅供參考,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。參考詞匯:作弊cheat(v.)說謊tell a lieTry to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Try to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest.However, with the development of society, we often hear plaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a fortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people’s delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don’t do that.The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling the treasure mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later bee infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.【解析】這是一篇誠信征文,英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài),注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實(shí)于材料,不必?cái)U(kuò)展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。9.馬上就要畢業(yè)了,班里的同學(xué)都在討論應(yīng)該如何慶祝初中畢業(yè)。以下是你的三位朋友的想法和理由。請(qǐng)用英語簡(jiǎn)要介紹他們的打算,并談?wù)勛约邯?dú)特的想法。為父母煮一餐飯。感謝他們的付出Tom做義工。證明自己長大了,有能力幫助他人Cathy舉行聚會(huì)。放松心情、開心一下Jane…….。……You注意:1.詞數(shù)在80左右。(短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))2.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。行文連貫,表達(dá)清楚,書寫規(guī)范。3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分。提示詞:義工volunteer(n.)These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our graduation. Here are some ideas from my friends.Jane plans to hold a big party with her friends to relax and have fun. Tom will cook a big meal for his parents. He wants to thank them for what they have done for him. Cathy is going to be a volunteer. She wants to show others that she has grown up and is able to help those in need.As for me, I will go traveling around with my friends. Traveling can not only enrich my knowledge but also leave me a good memory with my friends.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇話題作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。仔細(xì)審閱題意,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般將來時(shí)來寫。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!緦懽髁咙c(diǎn)】這篇短文語句通順,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。特別一些固定句型和短語的運(yùn)用,使文章增色,例如,plan to,not only …but also…等,上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。