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, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。文章條理分明,三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動(dòng)句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,主語從句。9.近年來,習(xí)近平主席提出了實(shí)現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的“中國夢(mèng)”。學(xué)校開展了“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn),以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。(可聯(lián)系實(shí)際,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。提示詞語: good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here. As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。d like to help people. For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word, I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作過程中,要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來,要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn),注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。10.中央電視臺(tái)《經(jīng)典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出,再次激發(fā)了人們對(duì)經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。讀書可以成就更美好的自己,讓讀書伴隨我們成長。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過的一本書或—首詩,并建議大家多讀書,讀好書。要點(diǎn)提示:讀書的重要性1. 獲取知識(shí),開闊眼界;2. 提升自我,增強(qiáng)自信……讀過的一本書或一首詩1. 作品內(nèi)容簡介;2. 讀書感悟及對(duì)自己的影響。多讀書,讀好書1. 利用閑暇時(shí)間多讀書,養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣;2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯:classic 經(jīng)典作品; open up one’s eyes 開闊眼界;improve oneself 提升自我; be more confident 更自信;responsibility 責(zé)任;cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book39。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一,三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過去時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。