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t in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外,還要進行適當拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明,三個要點提示都已表達清楚,并進行了適當拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,主語從句。9.假如你是李華,你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時間和地點,在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認真閱讀要點,寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點評:文章采取郵件格式,時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),語言準確,語意連貫,表達清楚,具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點:短語:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。句型:not only…but also;You39。d better …;I39。m looking forward to…。10.書面表達初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報“英語角”欄目向同學們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點 寫一封信,說說你的計劃?;顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。