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excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運動并談談自己的夢想。要求仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談談自己的夢想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作亮點:本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡潔,但是句意表達清楚;同時,本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達生動;用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。3. 假如你是李華,你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈J钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望,希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點,活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外,還要進行適當拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明,三個要點提示都已表達清楚,并進行了適當拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,主語從句。4.假如你即將在學校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言,請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點提示如下:(1)幾個月前,奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞(do square dancing)。(2)從那時起,奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞。(3)現(xiàn)在,奶奶比以前健康了,有了很多朋友。(4)有些鄰居有意見,認為音樂很吵,無法入睡。(5)你認為人們可以跳廣場舞,但……要求:(1)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。(2)要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當發(fā)揮。 Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a plaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,根據(jù)要點提示寫一篇學校英語興趣小組的活動中的發(fā)言稿。要注意隨著文章推進時態(tài)的變化,一開始應該選擇一般過去時,而后面應該選用一般現(xiàn)在時,最后表達自己觀點的時候也應該使用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致關(guān)系,構(gòu)思文章框架,列舉出可能會用到的好詞好句,記住千萬不能漏寫信息要點。參考詞匯就是必用詞匯,一定要運用到文章當中。在寫作中注意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞,使文章更加順暢,自然。5.假設你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語??端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。近日,又至畢業(yè)季,師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。為此,編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄,邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩如下:My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項:,不得抄寫短詩原文:、意思連貫、符合情境。,稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出,不計入總詞數(shù):。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher.I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely,Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to