【正文】 I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。8．假如你是李雷，你的英國(guó)筆友David發(fā)郵件向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾螌W(xué)好漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示和要求用英語(yǔ)給David回復(fù)郵件。要求：，再寫(xiě)出兩條如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議；；。郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear David,I’m glad to receive your . Here’s some advice on how to learn Chinese well. Best wishes. Yours， Li Lei【答案】Dear David,I’m glad to receive your . Here’s some advice on how to learn Chinese well.It’s a good idea to watch movies. You’ll find it helpful to improve your listening skills. Reading always plays a key role in language learning, so do more reading in your spare time.In my opinion, you’d better make more Chinese friends. They’ll be glad to lend you a hand and it provides a good chance for you to learn about Chinese culture. It’s a wise choice to use your cell phone, which allows you to use apps, or WeChat to learn Chinese. Practice makes perfect, so do remember to keep practicing every day!Follow the advice, and I’m sure you can learn Chinese well!Best wishes.Yours,Li Lei【解析】這是一篇提綱作文，讓考生給英國(guó)筆友David寫(xiě)封回信，就如何才能學(xué)好中文給出建議。這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作需要用第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：觀看中文電影；閱讀；另外至少再寫(xiě)出兩條建議，可自由發(fā)揮，如：學(xué)唱中文歌曲，交中國(guó)朋友，利用手機(jī)，應(yīng)用程序，或微信來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)中文等等。建議信要寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容及提出建議的理由和根據(jù)，理由要合情合理，語(yǔ)氣一定要緩和，因此建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。 9．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開(kāi)展“父親節(jié)活動(dòng)計(jì)劃”分享活動(dòng)，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽(tīng)聽(tīng)他的看法。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計(jì)劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。提示詞語(yǔ)： gift, love, opinion提示問(wèn)題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作，但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭；第二段寫(xiě)你為什么這么做；第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述父親節(jié)計(jì)劃；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述具體建議時(shí)，描寫(xiě)細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。