【正文】 lish Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項：，不得抄寫短詩原文：、意思連貫、符合情境。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應如何保護它們（不少于三條）。要求：1）恰當運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護大象。文章共分為三個方面的內容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當使用連詞。本篇文章內容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。