【正文】 n class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作過(guò)程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來(lái)佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：首先用一個(gè)自然段來(lái)闡明寫作的主題，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)（認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次，開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn)，陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例，相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn)，Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)。最后可以用說(shuō)理的方式來(lái)介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)，就是說(shuō)作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來(lái)說(shuō)出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。10．你是一位九年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明，你用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對(duì)你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。要點(diǎn)如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對(duì)自己不滿意。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。 （2）. 你的父母對(duì)你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。（舉例說(shuō)明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂(lè)意幫助你們。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。他們說(shuō)（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。 （2）. 第2要點(diǎn)和第3要點(diǎn)要用2—3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get good results, spend+時(shí)間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。