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der a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, 最終版本:Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears obviously pleasant, her eyes twinkling, her face lit up, full of delight and excitement. (34字)總結(jié):通過以上四個(gè)步驟,從定主謂入手,通過添加細(xì)節(jié),迅速制造出一個(gè)3040字左右的好句子作為大開頭。在小作文當(dāng)中,也是利用同樣的方法,迅速的說(shuō)明事由,細(xì)節(jié)的添加主要以答復(fù)以下幾個(gè)征詢題為主:誰(shuí)(who)在什么時(shí)候(when)在什么地點(diǎn)(where)出于何種緣故(why)通過何種方式(how)作了什么事情(what)例如:投訴信:對(duì)兩條狗進(jìn)展投訴1. These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.2. 3. 4. been causing trouble.5. vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, wereabandoned and have been causing trouble.6. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were 7. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, wereabandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, 字)while連接)2. 小作文模板聯(lián)絡(luò)完核心句寫作,小作文的模板就出來(lái)了3. 大作文模板(一)開頭段落:大作文按照?qǐng)D畫的內(nèi)容分成兩種:比喻意義的圖畫和實(shí)際意義的圖畫。在描繪時(shí)略有不同:實(shí)際意義的圖畫(如:商業(yè)捕魚,贍養(yǎng)老人。):文章第1段 :核心句 (一句寫明晰圖畫內(nèi)容)文章第2段:直截了當(dāng)進(jìn)展討論(寫作方法下面再談)。比喻意義的圖畫(如:母雞,花朵,跑步的小孩,小燈。)文章第1段 :核心句 (一句寫明晰圖畫內(nèi)容)文章第2段: 先用下邊的句子指出圖畫比喻義再進(jìn)展討論(寫作方法下面再談)。 A (比喻義)is just like B (圖畫中的形象)depicted in the picture above.例如:True love is just like the lamp depicted in the picture above.Some profiteers are just like the hen depicted in the picture above.The truly successful people are just like the running boy depicted in the picture above.(二)第二段 討論方法:迅速分析圖畫的含義,然后確定這個(gè)含義是好事仍然壞事。確定好之后就能夠選擇邏輯行進(jìn)方式了。壞事:好事:含義)? 好事: