【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 y businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent As a matter of fact，many of these businesses claim in the same way that（比較）the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay ※過渡：第一段說到可笑，下面就談不可笑——連接※例子：商場、政府的承諾行為※拓展：深化承諾行為的細節(jié)※結(jié)論：同母雞下蛋的承諾一樣虛無沒有價值※表示性質(zhì)，代替adj.=of +n.（小作文高分必殺）=of any help assistant=of any assistance good=of any good harmful=of any harmThe following examples will support this In schools，a unitexam not only declares the end of the former unit，but also acts as a reminder of the preview work for the next the business field，what a CEO needs to do at the end of a year is more than review and summarize（review and summarizing）。It is the time to formulate and effective and efficient development plan for next Just turn back to the sports ground.（句號結(jié)束）although in front of the end there isn‘t a real start——arrowhead，there surely exists an invisible one sprouting（appearing）in every athlete’s mind，blooming（being）the training strategy of the preparation for next ※承上啟下※舉例論證※舉例的同時說明結(jié)論：終點又是新起點，正是這種心態(tài)成為下次比賽成功的技巧或策略。判斷評論It is clear that promise is what you claim you can do or you will do，not what you really are or you are expected to Generally speaking，it is good and sometimes necessary to make mitment to people，but promising what you must or should do can be considered a kind of What the cartoon really aims at is not the funny picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our ※既點名了本段主題：談承諾，又是一個定義，起承上啟下作用?！约旱慕ㄗh?！俅螐娬{(diào)“承諾”這一社會現(xiàn)象。問題建議Child education has bee one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts，but also by people in all walks（職業(yè)、行業(yè)）of The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children ，it‘s high time that parents，educators and the government made concerted（共同努力的，同心協(xié)力的，conert得來）efforts to put an end to this （家長，老師和政府應該怎么做）※引出本段主題，兒童教育的現(xiàn)狀，用婉轉(zhuǎn)的方式表達。※本段結(jié)論：三方行動In our life，what we need most is selfinsurance and a proper view of challenges before Therefore，we should bear in mind that our petitors may not be as terrible（frightening）as expected，and our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and Only in this way can we overe any difficulties and ※從自己角度提出意見※具體行動的方法※only 表示強調(diào)，以及建議的價值。個人選擇All in all，I would say that living in the city is best（better），1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work（job opportunities）；2 after all，one can always spend 19 vacations in the country——and get the best of ※選擇結(jié)果※選擇原因※總結(jié)As for me，I have always led a regular By everyday exercises，I build up a strong body，2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward ※個人選擇或?qū)嵺`※選擇帶來的好的后果※拓展現(xiàn)實運用As we all know，children are the future of our country，Their healthy growth has therefore bee a serious concern among many It should be made clear that too much care is not real love and care for them are to prepare them for the faced with difficulties，they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overe the faced with fierce petition，they can employ their knowledge，skills and experience to confront with their This is the younger generation we can ※價值體現(xiàn)：孩子關(guān)乎祖國的未來?！鶈⑹荆褐匾脑颉挠柘Ｍ?007年范文寫作首段：圖畫描述：This is a series of interesting and thoughtprovoking goalkeeper，who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal，sees himself as a ‘s funnier is that the footballplayer，preparing to kick the ball，regards the goalkeeper as huge as the meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but of them lack courage and confidence in front of ：寓意象征+舉例說明The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence.（We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings.）We，undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM（the Examination for postgraduate candidates），provide a good of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well，so they even give up the chance of participating in the fact，the exam is not as difficult as they suppose，and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final ：建議+展望Accordingly，it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our we should bear in mind is that no one can overe difficulties without confidence.（In other words，We should be honest about the challenges we face.）only in this wa we can se a right it，and achieve ：，即文章的高分點，希望同學們學習。，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在寫作時犯這樣的錯誤。，希望大家不要背范文，學習精彩的句式表達，背會，通過多練習掌握這些 21 句型。小作文范文及解析2007年P(guān)art A 真題及解析（投訴信Directions：Write a letter to your university library，making suggestions for improveing its should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET not sign your own name at the den of the “Li Ming” not write the Whom It May Concern，I am a student in this university who regularly es to the library to spend ma spare speaking，the services you offer here are quite good； however，I have some suggestions for you to I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into begin with，will you please prolong the time for reading？ In the daytime，most of the students are having classes，so they can‘t e to the ，some of the books on shelves are out of you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines，we will be very really wish to have a more fortable you for your time and sincerely，Li Ming2008 Part A 真題及解析（致歉信）：Directions：You have just e back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob，your landlord him a letter tomake an apology，andsuggest a sho