【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ing and prepare for ’m really sorry that I won’t be able to e in this ’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!28The day before the speech contest English teacher talked to said that she and my schoolmate all wished me didn’t matter that I would win or I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a were such many people present!, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the was smiling but nodding at remembered her words and calm did a good job and beat the first my picture and the prize is hanging in the I see them I will often think of my English used to love science class—all of them—biology, chemistry ,geography, think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world I was a child , the rain was a mystery(奧秘). is always more mysteries look learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to never saw what I could use it in my daily most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor any other words, I am an only parents will do all they can make sure that I get a good did not want me to do any work at family。they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a things are in other homes, I brother Tom was very selfish when he was a small did not want share things with other he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place which I couldn’t find never helped said he is game of tennis making him very did not care if something he did made people instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the he is difference often helps grandma with housework, helping mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their week my parents and I took a twodays trip to Emei Mountain in everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and was about noon we arrived at the foot of the The three of them were very we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so time past came spent the night in a hotel on the top of the food was expensive and the service was was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about not to shout at usually will try to change, but they will take some time because they get angry all their might have to change for your method a couple of any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect—like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the this doesn’t work , bring in friend that you feel fortable, and have him or her help teachers worry the effects of television on young to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the abilityto enjoy one worries much about the radio program young people listen can be very one year the average child will see 25,000 television mercials， planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they don’t real I first learned to write in English，I ran into many main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into teacher advised me to keep my followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple day I wrote a little story and showed to my liked it very much and reads it to the all said the story is a good word were a great encouragement to ’m a newer here of a small would describe myself as shy and my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as ’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a feel unhappy every day, do I? don’t know that they don’t like to talk with 后加 be 或 bee 改為 which 改為 subjects 改為 used/ interesting 改為 interested 后加 is 改為 hearing 改為 am for。time 表示次數(shù)時，之前一般無介詞，直接用作狀語。如： We have meals three times a day/ match 改為 matches 改為 Playing/ give 改為 gives 后加 of 改為 importance 前后 the。像 chairman，captain，monitor，mayor 這類詞表示職務(wù)時，前面用零冠詞。但如這類職務(wù)用于指某人時，前面用定冠詞 改為 we15刪去 much/刪去 was 改為 watching Unfortunate 改為 Unfortunately。此處應(yīng)用副詞作狀語/among 改為 in 18 the 改為 one。由下文的another可知，上文用one lot 后加 of 改為 for 后加 to/.had 改為 have 23..but 改為 so all。all 與 the whole 重復(fù)，只能保留一處，由于在此題型中，只有多一個單詞的可能，故此處只能刪去 all/ prepare 改為 preparing。與上文的 reading 形成平行結(jié)構(gòu)，以滿足“spend some time on sth./in doing 。25 刪去 in。含有 this，that，last，next 等的時間狀語前不加任何介詞。 前加 a。 改為 returns。return 此處為名詞，many happy returns of the day 意為“祝你健康長壽”。 前加 my。 改為 schoolmates。因本句中有 all 一詞，所以 schoolmate 一詞應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式。30that 改為 whether。 改為 that。 。catch sight of 為固定搭配，sight 前不加任何冠詞。34but 改為 and。smiling 和 nodding 為兩個并列動作，在邏輯上無轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故 but 改為 and。 改為 calmed。在 and 連接的兩個并