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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ?！ ?. 水污染嚴(yán)重?！ ?. 應(yīng)保護(hù)水源，再利用水?！ . [思路點(diǎn)撥]： ?、傥捏w：記敘文?！ 、跁r(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫作手法，增加感染力?！ 、蹖懽髂康模焊嬖V讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性?！ inyun mountain is a famous place of interest. Every day a lot of tourists e here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment. they threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food. How dangerous it was. luckily， great changes have taken place here. tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins， and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well. They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains. All these changes make us very happy. b. [思路點(diǎn)撥]： ①夾敘夾議(說明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢??！ 、跁r(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)?！ 、蹚V告詞的含義——水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫作意圖)?！ ater is very important to humans. we can’t live without water. The water we can drink is falling. but some people don’t seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution is getting more and more serious. So we must do something to stop the pollution. We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it. if we don’t do this， the last drop of water will be a teardrop.10字原則：“結(jié)構(gòu)+要點(diǎn)+邏輯+語法+亮點(diǎn)！” 結(jié)構(gòu)：中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么尼？因?yàn)檫@種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰?！坝^點(diǎn)——要點(diǎn)——總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段
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