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ours, Li Hua 滿(mǎn)分理由 本文格式正確,內(nèi)容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確,特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮,既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I’m so glad to know that you’ll e to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School. There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. Yours, Li Hua 滿(mǎn)分理由 本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng),由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi),層次分明,錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處,很出彩,再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整,從開(kāi)頭的問(wèn)候語(yǔ)到結(jié)尾都很完備。Dear Bob, I’m