【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 gned to them. Employers are focused on outes. They don’t have the time or the desire to micromanage employees. They expect their employees to solve problems, to selfdirect, and to acplish tasks autonomously. Having specialized knowledge makes employees valuable only if they can innovatively apply it in original ways that benefit the pany. ? Paragraph 3 ? Employers hire people who are likable and can work within a group. Collaboration is essential to increased productivity. Those who are open to new ideas work well on project teams or on mittees. Their adaptability fosters creativity. ? 3. 21 ? 1)支持面優(yōu)點(diǎn)兩點(diǎn)充分論述 +反對(duì)面優(yōu)點(diǎn) 一到兩點(diǎn)簡略論述 ? 題目舉例：現(xiàn)場(chǎng)觀看表演比看電視更好？ ? 假定我們選擇支持看電視 ：有講解，有不同角度攝影，有精彩回放 ，更安全，更放松 ，可能見到明星，可能有偶遇 ? 2) 21模式 ? 討論點(diǎn)的優(yōu)點(diǎn) 兩點(diǎn)充分論述 +討論點(diǎn)的缺點(diǎn) 一到兩點(diǎn)簡略論述 ? 題目舉例： ? 電視是否破壞了我們和朋友以及家人的交流？ ? 假定我們選擇電視沒有破壞我們和家人的交流 ? 但是 , 花費(fèi)大量時(shí)間，影響交流 ? 主題句通常位于段落的句首，對(duì)于整個(gè)段落起著總領(lǐng)的作用。主題句是證明論點(diǎn)的理由。 ? 主題句要簡明扼要，直接明確，而且是陳述句 ? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place. ? 1. New breakthroughs in medical science will allow humans to finally eradicate diseases that have claimed hundreds of thousands of lives every year in the past decades. ? 2. New breakthroughs in medical science will bee wonderfully helpful in the near future. ? 1. 例證法 ? 用舉例來說明問題，形象生動(dòng) ? 2. 因果法 ? 通過因果關(guān)系和練習(xí)來表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，一環(huán)套一環(huán)，嚴(yán)絲合縫 ? 3. 比較對(duì)比法 ? 通過正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)的對(duì)比和類比，來闡述觀點(diǎn)，解決問題 ? ? 提出論點(diǎn) 列舉例證 分析例證（給出細(xì)節(jié)） 得出結(jié)論 （重述論點(diǎn)） ? 每個(gè)論點(diǎn)都要有理由 thesis, topic sentences ? 每個(gè)理由都要有例子 topic sentence, examples ? 每個(gè)例子都要有細(xì)節(jié) examples, what??? ? 例子是什么？ ? 例子是奧巴馬，金正恩，喬布斯， Lady Gaga ? 例子是哈利波特，杰克和露絲，金蓮和西門大官人 ? 例子是樓上的趙大媽，隔壁的李小二，街上賣包子的七舅老爺 ? 但這都不是最關(guān)鍵的 ? 最關(guān)鍵是的， ? 例子不一定是誰誰誰誰說了什么，但一定是做了什么 ? I have a very confident friend. ? confident不是自信 ? confident是句廢話 ? He had given a speech on astronomy in front of 500 people. His knees didn’t tremble. He didn’t feel nausea. There was always a big and brilliant smile on his face. At the end of the speech, he bowed deeply to embrace the deafening applause from audience. ? 例子，是具體做了什么， 而不是你的判斷和評(píng)判 ? I have a friend. His English is very good. He went to America and began to study in a famous university ? I have a friend named Jason. Last autumn, he took the SAT exam in HK and won a high score of 2350. Therefore, he was matriculated by MIT this spring and has been in the USA for almost a month. ? 個(gè)人例子，有名有姓，有時(shí)間有地方，有事件 ? The development of science and technology does bring much convenience to our daily life. One of the best examples is the microwave oven, which has been widely used in families. ? Using a microwave oven for cooking can not only heat up the food faster, but also provide a smokefree cooking environment. ? People are able to make use of the extra time saved from cooking to do many other things. ? Smoke created when cooking in traditional ways is always a threat to people’s health, while a microwave oven will solve the problem easily by using an environmentally friendly power, that is, radiation power. ? What is more, a microwave oven has a time controller, which will help people decide the cooking time, and it can ensure safety and provide an easy cooking. ? Without any doubt, the microwave oven, as a typical example of modern science and technology, has indeed improved our lives greatly. ? 舉例法例子展開的模式 (1) ? .....因?yàn)槲矣X得 .....(提出觀點(diǎn) ) ? .....(列舉例子 ) ? 1..... ? 1 ? 2..... ? 2 ? ? I have to emphasize the importance of saving money. A plenty of money in the bank account can help us get through sudden emergencies and occasional accidents. I have a friend named Victor. His family is not rich but they keep a good habit of depositing a certain amount of money into their bank account each month. He sometimes plained to me about this situation because it disables him to spend money buying something he desires. ? But last month, while he was riding to school in the rush hour, he was involved a horrible accident. He was terribly injured and a large amount of money was immediately required to get him an operation. Most of their family’s deposit was put into use and fortunately, he got through this nightmare. ? Now when we talk about this, he says he feels so blessed and grateful that their family keeps this habit and he will do everything he can to support it. This incident strikes me tremendously and makes me realize how significant deposits are to us ordinary people. ? The first reason I want to put forward is that playing games, as one of the most wonderful ways to relax, can definitely help adults release their pressure. My uncle Victor works in a highly petitive puter pany, so he has to work really hard to get all his work done and to meet the demand of the pany. The high pressure resulting from the heavy workload has almost broken him down since he has found no way to release it. ? However, months ago, his son introduced a video game to him, which attracted him immediately. And he started to play it after work as relaxation. He played it like a child, shouting, laughing and cheering with his son. Now he always plays games as entertainment and considers it to be the best way of relief from stress. This incident gives me a full understanding of the fact that how important games are to adults as a letout of their stress. ? 舉例法例子展開的模式 (2) ? 1. 提出觀點(diǎn)，給出原因 ? 2. 開始舉例 ? 3. 交代例子的背景 ? 4. 介紹例子的原因或問題 (聯(lián)系觀點(diǎn) ) ? 5. 描述解決問題的方法，給出具體的細(xì)節(jié)描述 ? 6.