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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ing. You should write no less than 120/150 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 很多人開(kāi)始在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)買(mǎi)商品2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物可能存在的問(wèn)題3．我的看法Online Shopping首段：3句話(huà)= 背景+事實(shí)描述+舉例說(shuō)明The past decade has witnessed the huge advancement of Information Technology (背景描述). And shopping through the Internet has gained great popularity among web suffers（主題事實(shí)描述）. For instance, it can be noticed that an increasing number of youngsters purchase clothes, books, electrical equipment and the like on Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.（舉例法擴(kuò)展段落） (或：A case in point is the Group Purchasing, which attracts thousands of customers. 舉例+定語(yǔ)從句）2段：?jiǎn)栴}分析4句話(huà) = 主題句+ 危害1+危害2 +危害總結(jié)In spite of the convenience and low price of this shopping, others argue that we can not turn a blind eye to its negative aspects. Firstly, they point out that the quality may not be as superior as it is described and sometimes, it is possible for customers to buy fake modities. In addition, many customers find it troublesome to make a change when they are not satisfied. As has been noted, these do exert bad impacts.尾段：解決措施（即我的看法）3句話(huà) = 總說(shuō)+建議+展望未來(lái)As a customer, I am convinced that effective measures should be taken to enhance it.(總說(shuō)看法) To be specific, it is suggested that regulations and rules should be worked out to scrutinize online shop owners. (或者：Specifically, shoppers are welladvised to be alert when purchasing online.) A promising online shopping is just awaiting us if we sp
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